Emperor's Indignation Posted April 27, 2010 Author Share Posted April 27, 2010 I have started again with the Crypt Keepers Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/138095-midnights-edge/page/2/#findComment-2379076 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace Debonair Posted April 30, 2010 Share Posted April 30, 2010 at present this is just brain storming and alot will seem familiar for those who read it before this Origins: Night Lords war band, seperated from legion after power struggle between the current legion master and a member of his retinue came to a head the aggressors name was Archion a strong warrior capable of over throughing the master but chose instead to take those loyal to him and set up on his own thus the Crypt Keepers came to be Needs some explaining, surely a warrior strong enough to take control of one of the most infamous chaos forces of all time would leap at the chance to harness such power, rather than go his own way. I like the idea, but it'll need justifying. Jungle planet where their unholy monastry resides known as the CRYPT where the equipment and vehiclesare stored, it is called the crypt because it is where the dreadnoughts that they have are kept. The building is as vast above as below ground Jungle planet. Right. Vast fortress monastery. Gotcha. OK, is the whole world called crypt, or just the monastery? Are there people there? Do the CK recruit from those people if they exist, and if not, where do they recruit from? Beliefs: undivided but tend to side with tzneetch utilizing a crusader pattern land raider obtained on a terror raid of a forge world now loyal to Archion combat techniques: terror raids same as parent legion with a heavy use of raptors squads Your beliefs are one sentence. :huh: What motivates the chapter? What makes them fight? Why do they keep a crypt full of equipment? Why did they split from the Night Lords? What do the CK want to achieve? You've got a leaning towards assault? OK, cool. What roles do the other marines play in the battles? You know, if you haven't read the DIY guide, you really ought to. Then to follow up, try looking through the Librarium at some of the IT's in there. They'll give you some examples of what you should be aiming to do with your chapter. ;) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/138095-midnights-edge/page/2/#findComment-2383010 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor's Indignation Posted April 30, 2010 Author Share Posted April 30, 2010 just a few tweeks in most sections, wether the add on's make sence or not is a different matter Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/138095-midnights-edge/page/2/#findComment-2383220 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor's Indignation Posted May 20, 2010 Author Share Posted May 20, 2010 Im just alittle low on ideas and my thought processes are running farily slow just now. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/138095-midnights-edge/page/2/#findComment-2406453 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor's Indignation Posted October 11, 2012 Author Share Posted October 11, 2012 I've decided to start picking over the IA again after a long break of something close to three years. I've decided to start picking over the IA again after a long break of something close to three years. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/138095-midnights-edge/page/2/#findComment-3205337 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor's Indignation Posted October 12, 2012 Author Share Posted October 12, 2012 I was thinking on a near complete re-write, that will have to wait until I have computer access Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/138095-midnights-edge/page/2/#findComment-3206258 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Messor Posted October 12, 2012 Share Posted October 12, 2012 Keep us posted, we're ready to help out however needed. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/138095-midnights-edge/page/2/#findComment-3206263 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Emperor's Indignation Posted October 21, 2012 Author Share Posted October 21, 2012 Midnights Edge : Chaos predator annihilator (midnights shadow) chaos land raider crusader (midnights embrace) Chaos land raider ( Chaos terminator lord ( Chaos sorcerer ( Chaos squad (spectres of midnight) Chaos squad ( Deamon prince ( Obliterator ( Chaos biker Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/138095-midnights-edge/page/2/#findComment-3215382 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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