Pig Of Sparta Posted October 18, 2008 Share Posted October 18, 2008 Did these while i was bored at work and thought i'd share them all with you. http://i347.photobucket.com/albums/p456/pigofsparta/Bolter.jpg http://i347.photobucket.com/albums/p456/pigofsparta/MarineII.jpg obviously the scale and perspective are slightly off on the bolter, and the marine is probably not to scale either, but let me know what you think. i thought about maybe adding a chainsword in with the bolter, if i can get the hang of the GIMP program. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/149563-a-couple-of-doodles/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
JetfireUK Posted October 18, 2008 Share Posted October 18, 2008 I'll bite the bullet and give you my two pence... The bolter looks good and I personally wouldn't add to it. If you want to add a chainsword, why not draw another bolter with it added? With the marine, the first thing that strikes me is that the marine looks too tall. I recall that in manga you can use a proportion of 8 heads to make up the total height of a man so that's something to keep in mind. You might also look at the width of the backpack as it looks too thin and the feet look a little large compared to the hands. Overall a good start; just keep practising. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/149563-a-couple-of-doodles/#findComment-1737343 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rogue Angel Veteran Posted October 18, 2008 Share Posted October 18, 2008 gr8 work mate just a few things the handle on the bolter is a little thin, but apart from that its pretty kick ass. the second thing is the marine and i agree with JetfireUK it is a little tall and the backpack as well is a little on the thin side. but keep it up looking foward to seeing the finished products. keep it up mate.. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/149563-a-couple-of-doodles/#findComment-1737348 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pig Of Sparta Posted October 19, 2008 Author Share Posted October 19, 2008 Thanks guys, I agree with you on the back pack, but i don't wanna bulk it up too much. And thankfully you never notice my error on the fore grip of the bolter... i forgot to round off the edges :-( Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/149563-a-couple-of-doodles/#findComment-1737719 Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianBlessed Posted October 19, 2008 Share Posted October 19, 2008 He looks a bit like Boba Fett. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/149563-a-couple-of-doodles/#findComment-1737723 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pig Of Sparta Posted October 19, 2008 Author Share Posted October 19, 2008 He looks a bit like Boba Fett. I guess he does, but that's early crusade era power armour for you.... Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/149563-a-couple-of-doodles/#findComment-1737726 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mal Posted October 19, 2008 Share Posted October 19, 2008 actually I would have said iron man more than boba fett, but mabey its just me... good work anyway, but the marine looks too thin... Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/149563-a-couple-of-doodles/#findComment-1737764 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ompfris Posted October 19, 2008 Share Posted October 19, 2008 Thanks guys, I agree with you on the back pack, but i don't wanna bulk it up too much. And thankfully you never notice my error on the fore grip of the bolter... i forgot to round off the edges :-( you forgot to round off the edges?... I was gonna say its a little wonky lol... and the skull/wing on the front is too small and what everyone else will say or has done already... to thin.... back pack and torso, better then my drawing anyway! lol Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/149563-a-couple-of-doodles/#findComment-1738286 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Razrhaghul Posted October 19, 2008 Share Posted October 19, 2008 great start C&C: torso backpack as has been mentioned the bolter, increase the grip size, and you might want to check your perspective, where the grip connects with the rest of the gun sits a bit too high, if you were to hold it, it would be slightly diagonal from the rest of the gun. also the sickle mag sweeps forward a bit much, just less curving. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/149563-a-couple-of-doodles/#findComment-1738395 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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