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Finnished this last night and was quite pleased. After looking at it today I notice some things I would have done differently, like bulking up the chest and stomach area and maybe thin down the right upper arm. But overall i'm happy with it.

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Any C&C or tips on how to improve would be greatly appreciated.

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The helmet, specifically the face part of it, is getting an effect I call 'plating', in that you made it at less of an angle from the viewer than the rest, so it looks like it's jutting out on one side.

 

Same thing with the far edge of the pistol.

 

Other than that, not bad.

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  • 4 weeks later...
Actually, I quite like the stubbiness of the pistol, it suits for a short-range weapon. I think the chest is about right, just thin the pistol arm a little and t'will be fine. Yes, this will make the gun look even bigger but that's not necessarily a bad thing - calibre is meant to be .75 remember, so it's going to be a rather outsize weapon to start with.
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