Codex Grey Posted October 20, 2008 Share Posted October 20, 2008 Finnished this last night and was quite pleased. After looking at it today I notice some things I would have done differently, like bulking up the chest and stomach area and maybe thin down the right upper arm. But overall i'm happy with it. Any C&C or tips on how to improve would be greatly appreciated. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/149761-virtus/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ompfris Posted October 20, 2008 Share Posted October 20, 2008 Yeah if you had bulked up the body then you would not have the thick arm problem. looking good none the less Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/149761-virtus/#findComment-1739451 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Askren Posted October 20, 2008 Share Posted October 20, 2008 The helmet, specifically the face part of it, is getting an effect I call 'plating', in that you made it at less of an angle from the viewer than the rest, so it looks like it's jutting out on one side. Same thing with the far edge of the pistol. Other than that, not bad. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/149761-virtus/#findComment-1739767 Share on other sites More sharing options...
lord_bunny Posted October 20, 2008 Share Posted October 20, 2008 very good, a tad off bolt pistol, but nothing at all wrong! looks a lot like 3rd ed stuff. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/149761-virtus/#findComment-1739786 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Codex Grey Posted October 21, 2008 Author Share Posted October 21, 2008 Thanks all! Ompfris: Yeah bulking up the chest would solve the arm problem I guess. Askren: I'm not a 100% sure what you mean, but i think I do. I'm gonna try working on that. Anything else? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/149761-virtus/#findComment-1741474 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tratos The torn Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 wow, nice job on the helmet. also nice shading Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/149761-virtus/#findComment-1770911 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Montuhotep Posted November 13, 2008 Share Posted November 13, 2008 Actually, I quite like the stubbiness of the pistol, it suits for a short-range weapon. I think the chest is about right, just thin the pistol arm a little and t'will be fine. Yes, this will make the gun look even bigger but that's not necessarily a bad thing - calibre is meant to be .75 remember, so it's going to be a rather outsize weapon to start with. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/149761-virtus/#findComment-1771027 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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