Battle Brother Loken Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 ok first off if this is in the wrong section please let me know or just move it and now to buiesness i just started playing Pre Heresy Wolves but i write fluff like a madman(so much fun and if yah want me to write yah some i will do it for free or for souls) now down to the first story “We Got COMPANY!” that’s all 7th Captain Bjomolf heard over the Vox net. The next thing he knew the street was swarming with orks. Bjomolf gripped his double headed hammer which Russ had granted him when he was first granted the rank of Captain of the 7th Great Company tightly in his hand and waited for the orks. He swung at back and forth smashing apart orks as he went, it still balanced and swung the same as the day it was given to him so long ago. All of a sudden there it was, an ork of monstrous proportions. It stood around 12 feet tall and wielded an even bigger axe; Bjomolf let out a cry “FOR RUSS AND THE EMPEROR!” and charged headlong into the ork. The fight was brutal and short; Bjomolf’s thunder hammer smashed the axe in two with one swing. But what he wasn’t suspecting was the orks quick response of grabbing him by the chest plate and tossing him like a rag doll into a wall. Then the ork was on top of him strangling the life out him, Bjomolf with his hammer out of reach struggled with all his genetically enhanced human strength but could not break free from the orks grip. Just at that moment a huge armoured figure plowed into the ork throwing it aside. Russ Primarch of the Space Wolves stood there in the lightly falling snow for a mere second before beheading the ork. Then he turned to Bjomolf and put out a armour clad hand to help him up “it seems yah ‘ave gotten in a bit over yah head eh Bjomolf?” then Russ laughing, handed him his hammer and strode back into the fray hacking orks down as he went. so what did yah think? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/158955-my-space-wolf-fluff-thread/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ullr Direfang Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 i think it is pretty good. i tend to be like you too, and write up a bunch of fluff on my guys. i don't have any posted but i might some day. they only thing i would change is this: granted the rank of Captain of the 7th Great Company feel free to make up your own company name. yours would be something like: Bjomolf's "insert wolfy name here" Great Company or even just: Bjomolf's Great Company. and he is a Wolf Lord not a captain. i don't mean to be rude and change YOUR fluff, i just kinda feel it would give it a more Space Wolf feel. good luck with the rest Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/158955-my-space-wolf-fluff-thread/#findComment-1862314 Share on other sites More sharing options...
no name the great Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 it was pretty good, but i agree with our brother wolf, u should go ahead and give them a name Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/158955-my-space-wolf-fluff-thread/#findComment-1862323 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battle Brother Loken Posted January 29, 2009 Author Share Posted January 29, 2009 ok i just couldent think of a name at the time but dont worry these boys will have a name Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/158955-my-space-wolf-fluff-thread/#findComment-1862332 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beef Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 I like it But why does Russ sound scottish?? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/158955-my-space-wolf-fluff-thread/#findComment-1862559 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ullr Direfang Posted January 29, 2009 Share Posted January 29, 2009 I like it But why does Russ sound scottish?? i kinda think it would be fitting for him to sound scottish... i personally don't have a good viking accent so i tend to use a scottish one, i feel it is a good fit for the wolves. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/158955-my-space-wolf-fluff-thread/#findComment-1862977 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marshal Rohr Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 Viking wasn't a language It was a way of life! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/158955-my-space-wolf-fluff-thread/#findComment-1863559 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sköll Khan Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 Viking... It was a way of life! What do you mean "WAS"? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/158955-my-space-wolf-fluff-thread/#findComment-1863606 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jester262 Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 little history lesson, I know kinda going off topic. what we know of today as the Vikings is not what they called themselves. They were refered to as the Norse, or Northmen. The term viking actually came from what they did. When they decided to go off and loot and pillage, they "Went off a Viking" Ok, history lesson over :D Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/158955-my-space-wolf-fluff-thread/#findComment-1863718 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ullr Direfang Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 *hangs head in shame* :D i was just trying to be comical.... i know viking isn't a language, i just was in that "i just got back from class but have less the a half hour to eat and get to the next one" mode, so viking came to mind before norse.... *sad face* Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/158955-my-space-wolf-fluff-thread/#findComment-1863751 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beef Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 #They proabably spoke Nordic Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/158955-my-space-wolf-fluff-thread/#findComment-1863832 Share on other sites More sharing options...
jester262 Posted January 30, 2009 Share Posted January 30, 2009 *hangs head in shame* :o i was just trying to be comical.... i know viking isn't a language, i just was in that "i just got back from class but have less the a half hour to eat and get to the next one" mode, so viking came to mind before norse.... *sad face* I know, I just felt like passing on a little info. Sorry if I made it sound like I was correcting you. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/158955-my-space-wolf-fluff-thread/#findComment-1864456 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battle Brother Loken Posted February 14, 2009 Author Share Posted February 14, 2009 here a bit more tried to let up on Russ's accent a little bit Bjomolf paced nervously, the Emperors Children were supposed to be arriving today with their Primarch Fulgrim at the head. Leman Russ did not want his brothers help in the fights of UpoceVI but never the less Fulgrim was coming. Bjomolf looked out the bay window to see Fulgrims Firebird coming towards the hanger, he looked around trying to find his Primarch for it was not like him not to greet a visitor espisacly one of his brothers. At that moment he felt of heavy hand on his shoulder and the gruff voice of Leman Russ “Do yah think that I would miss my brothers visit Bjomolf?” and then Russ’s growling chuckle. The Firebird had landed and its front ramp was lowering as Bjomolf turned to his Primarch. “No my lord it was just…” Bjomolf trailed off as he saw Fulgrim. In his life Bjomolf had only seen three of the great brothers, his own great leader Leman Russ, Magnus and the Night Haunter but now he saw when Russ had said that Fulgrim was a bit more of a fancy boy than they were. Russ’s voice boomed out over the hanger “Fulgrim I see yah still carry your self like a woman!” a huge smile cracked over Russ’s scarred face. To Bjomolf’s surprise Fulgrim’s retort can back swiftly. “And I see you still carry that mead horn with you!” Russ roared back “Never go anywere without mead brother!” and in saying this he charged Fulgrim and embraced him in a bear hug that would break a normal human like nothing at all. “Bjomolf come here” said Russ “This fellow is the captain you will be getting to know on our stay of UpoceVI, his name is Decius” Decius nodded in his direction and Bjomolf was surprised of just how orderly the rest of the Emperors Children were. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/158955-my-space-wolf-fluff-thread/#findComment-1883042 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Battle Brother Loken Posted February 16, 2009 Author Share Posted February 16, 2009 Fulgrim then looked Russ in the eye and said with wariness in his voice “I am not the one who will be accompanying you in this war brother, I have been called to help Horus and his Luna Wolves” Russ’s face filled with a mix of rage and confusion and then growled, “Then who is to fight beside my Wolves?” Fulgrim just smiled and pointed to his Firebird even as a huge figure marched out of it. “Russ our brother Angron will be with you in this war” said Fulgrim coolly. “Didn’t know you to shy away from a fight Russ but maybe you need my help to win this war?” bellowed Angron. Russ howled and slammed into Angron, Angron faster than thought possible flipped Russ over his should and brought him crashing to the ground. Angron snarled “I see you still fight like a madman Russ and you need more than that to beat me.” “Don’t talk about skill brother” chuckled Russ “ you wouldn’t win so much if it wasn’t for your brain implants” “These little things?” snarled Angron “Fulgrim the woman he is just told me they made me look like a work of beautiful art” “Fulgrim why do you lie to our brother, we both know he has a face no one but the Emperor could love,” said Russ with a huge smile on his face. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/158955-my-space-wolf-fluff-thread/#findComment-1885768 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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