col.woods606 Posted February 11, 2009 Share Posted February 11, 2009 e: got the advice I was looking for for this story on another board I posted it in thnx anyway though, I'd lock this topic if I could but I don't know how so this is the next best thing Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/160150-a-technical-error/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrus Manus Posted February 11, 2009 Share Posted February 11, 2009 It's a good story, I'd like to read more. However and it's a big one... The name Achilles breaks the sense of belief in the story, and to an extent so does 'Myrmidon.' Take a look at this to see what I mean. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/160150-a-technical-error/#findComment-1879137 Share on other sites More sharing options...
col.woods606 Posted February 11, 2009 Author Share Posted February 11, 2009 Thnx for your reply, and I get where you are coming from but .. I know the name "Achilles" isn't original blah blah blah but I like it Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/160150-a-technical-error/#findComment-1879169 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrus Manus Posted February 11, 2009 Share Posted February 11, 2009 Ah, seemed to have missed the bit at the bottom. If that's the case, I wonder if Diomedes (the most glorious character of all ;) ) will make an appearance? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/160150-a-technical-error/#findComment-1879175 Share on other sites More sharing options...
col.woods606 Posted February 11, 2009 Author Share Posted February 11, 2009 hmm I think I'll change the name in this text as it appears it will affect people's responses to it somewhat...*edits* Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/160150-a-technical-error/#findComment-1879180 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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