Chapter Master Justinian Posted April 14, 2009 Share Posted April 14, 2009 So heres my pitch for my DIY chapter it kinda sounds like a narrative. Following the death of the Emperor, Rogal Dorn became a vengeful crusader who led the Imperial Fists on a great crusade to cleanse themselves of their failure. This crusade culminated with the battle of the Iron Cage in which the Imperial Fists suffered heavy losses but with the help of the Ultramarines the Imperial Fists were victorious and drove the Iron Warriors from the planet of Sebastus IV. Dorn agreed to the restructuring of his legion but not before dispatching his 11th company under the command of Captain Nicodemus Faust to hunt down the Iron warriors who had fled Sebastus IV. Pursuing their quarry into the Eye of Terror the 11th company arrives at an unknown industrial world which had been drawn into the warp. Entering orbit of the planet Faust was forced to order a planetary drop of all personnel as the battle barge Imperial Hammer came under fire from three traitor ships. Upon making planet fall the company discovered that the world’s population were enslaved to the Iron Warriors but had in the majority remained loyal to the Emperor. due to limited resources the 11th company waged a guerilla war over the next 7 years scavenging repairs for there amour from there fallen foes (resulting in their current silver colors) though to differentiate between enemy and ally the company retained the red of their helmets. The war culminated when the main Iron warrior’s fortress was besieged by an army of revolting slaves aided by the main forces that remained of the 11th company. Faust did not lead the assault though, for along with his most trusted and skilled brethren he infiltrated the fortress and sought to cut the head from the snake. Upon entering the citadel Faust came upon the foe he had pursued for the better part of a decade. Warsmith Achlys the butcher, the two warriors entered into a glorious battle that ended when Faust cut down his foe and took his head as his trophy with the intent of presenting it to dorn. Outside the Eye of Terror the passing of 10,000 years had wrought many changes upon the galaxy. Dorn was gone, the legions no longer existed and the imperium was ravaged by war. When a fleet of ships emerged from the Eye of Terror hailing codes from millennia past identifying themselves as Imperial Fists, chaplain Lo Chang was sent to investigate. learning the fate of the galaxy and that the place of the honored 11th company no longer existed within the Imperial Fists chapter Faust along with the remains of his company became an independent chapter naming themselves as the Ghosts of War. The chapter is based out of a mobile fleet and they draw recruits from the former slaves who were liberated by their hand. The chapter also posses many ancient weapons of war such as the Mk14 Bullock Jet Cycle. The chapter specializes in urban warfare and its fleet is currently in campaign against the Ork Empire of Charadon. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/166004-ghosts-of-war/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
LPetersson Posted April 14, 2009 Share Posted April 14, 2009 To be completely honest, I tried to read it, but just couldn't... Paragraphs are your friends whereas a big block of text really isn't... Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/166004-ghosts-of-war/#findComment-1954404 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapter Master Justinian Posted April 14, 2009 Author Share Posted April 14, 2009 haha my bad. hope this is better Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/166004-ghosts-of-war/#findComment-1954406 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marek Grimfang Posted April 14, 2009 Share Posted April 14, 2009 To be completely honest, I tried to read it, but just couldn't... Paragraphs are your friends whereas a big block of text really isn't... Same. And Im not sure how this is Space Wolf related. The names aren't even Wolfy. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/166004-ghosts-of-war/#findComment-1954407 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapter Master Justinian Posted April 14, 2009 Author Share Posted April 14, 2009 i dont kno why it put it as a space wolves topic. im new to the site and still tryn to figure everything out Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/166004-ghosts-of-war/#findComment-1954412 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bran Scalphunter Posted April 14, 2009 Share Posted April 14, 2009 Ask a Moderator (Max Dammit would probably do it for ya) to boot this into Liber Astartes. That way you'll get much more work from DIY Marines. Here, it's all Space Wolf stuff. And welcome to the B&C whelp! :lol: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/166004-ghosts-of-war/#findComment-1954567 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Durfast Spiritwolf Posted April 14, 2009 Share Posted April 14, 2009 It's a good tale and not too difficult to read in my opinion. It's just in the wrong place. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/166004-ghosts-of-war/#findComment-1954780 Share on other sites More sharing options...
G. A. K. Posted April 15, 2009 Share Posted April 15, 2009 it does have a slight 13 co. feel to it but not too much. A nice tale though. G Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/166004-ghosts-of-war/#findComment-1955043 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chapter Master Justinian Posted April 15, 2009 Author Share Posted April 15, 2009 i actually am a space wolves fan ( when i got into the game it was my 1st codex and my 1st model was ulric. my wold lord is Torvald the feeder of ravens) so i did base them slightly off of Russ ordering the 13th to hunt down the Thousand Sons Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/166004-ghosts-of-war/#findComment-1955807 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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