The Lords of Conatmination

[Kreative]

Hey hey.

 

I've been a lurker on these forums for awhile, and decided to start posting. First, I have a piece of background for my army, the Lords of Contamination, that I wrote up for my entry to a tournament comming up this summer. I'm looking to improve this, and any suggestions to help me improve.

 

The Lords of Contamination

An Altered Belief

Buro Bligeon woke up with a cold sweat, frantically looking around to see if everything was in order. The captain of the Obliterators of Blight had just woke up from another one of the vision-dreams that plagued him. The dream placed him on top of a hill, battle torn fields littered with dead bodies around him. He felt the sensation of victory, but the celebrating troops around him were not his space marines, but the traitor forces of nurgle he had been fighting against all his life. In the distance was the destroyed hive city of Batrico, a city on Criar III that his company was on the way to defend. When he turned around, a great grotesque smiling face of Nurgle was in the sky, and his voice spoke