verpine Posted May 9, 2009 Share Posted May 9, 2009 I'm pleased at how he turned out: Not too shabby, eh? :rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peck Posted May 9, 2009 Share Posted May 9, 2009 Loos pretty good. I have three critiques, though: 1. The metal areas look like they could do with a wash of black to give them some depth. 2. It's a bit hard to see, but maybe you could clean up under his eyes a little. 3. Don't Black Templars normally have more, well, crap all over them? I think, being a seargent and all, he might do with some passages scribbled on his armour and some purity seals. But that's how I interperate the Templars, so feel free to take that one with a pinch of salt. Also, where does that iron halo-skull banner come from? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
verpine Posted May 10, 2009 Author Share Posted May 10, 2009 Thanks for the C&C. I'll give it a black wash ASAP. I don't play real BT, like w/the codex and everything, I just paint them BT. And the purity seals and crap, well, you hit the nail right on the head. CRAP *no offense to anyone* The banner is from the AOBR captain. EDIT Touched up and closeup pics: Now you can see some of the highlights. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Messanger of Death Posted May 10, 2009 Share Posted May 10, 2009 I like the free hand of the Templar Cross but I do agree with Peck about needing to add depth to the metal areas. Any other models you have finished? Messanger Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
verpine Posted May 10, 2009 Author Share Posted May 10, 2009 Umm... I do have other models but i really just slapped some paint on them... I'm not very proud of 'em. I think i'll repaint them and then post them for your viewing pleasure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sword brethren Posted May 10, 2009 Share Posted May 10, 2009 hes good, i do agree with peck, drown him in trinkets, black templars love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MEanBOb Posted May 12, 2009 Share Posted May 12, 2009 Its unfortunate that you don't use the BT codex, its so nice *points directly at Accept any challenge*. :lol: But really, us black templars like writing litanies all over our armor, chaining our weapons to our limbs and having templar crosses all over, especially if you are a member of the sword brethren (which, in the C:SM = veteran sergeants). Your flesh needs depth and you need to use a smaller brush for the writing, otherwise I like your black armor highlights and freehand cross. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
verpine Posted May 12, 2009 Author Share Posted May 12, 2009 Hmm... well I suppose it wouldn't be too much trouble to scribble stuff over his armor... Pics soon if I decide to do it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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