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My First Novamarine


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I'm working on a short story how this unlikely pair know eachother, lets just say, it involves zombie-bashing! I plan on converting all my ultrasmurfs to Novamarines.

 

And so, here is my Wolf Priest Liam Tamant and Captain of the 5th, Korvus Mane.

 

http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff178/JEFF4i017/LiamTamantKorvusMane.jpg

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I like both the schemes youve used. Aside from the red bolter clip, I think these would benefit from some Highlighting. Nothing really jumps out. It could be the picture/camera, but I think you should try the armor at least, as the smaller details might not need it.

 

Good otherwise! Worthy of the B+C.

:P Yeah I can see it now.

 

Cap: "Hell and damnnation I have run out of blessed ammo for my Bolter"

Space Marine: "Sir, More ammo"

<Tosses a clip over>

Cap: "What is this!?! The clip is not red! It is boltgun metal! I cannot use this! With me brothers Charge!"

 

And so on...

 

But I also have on more nitpicky thing You sorta lose the writing on the banner. I suggest a lighter color so it would stand out a little more.

But great job! Keep it up. I look forward to more.

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