JEFF4i Posted May 17, 2009 Share Posted May 17, 2009 I'm working on a short story how this unlikely pair know eachother, lets just say, it involves zombie-bashing! I plan on converting all my ultrasmurfs to Novamarines. And so, here is my Wolf Priest Liam Tamant and Captain of the 5th, Korvus Mane. http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff178/JEFF4i017/LiamTamantKorvusMane.jpg Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/168702-my-first-novamarine/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuchinawa Posted May 17, 2009 Share Posted May 17, 2009 I like 'em both one thing... The red clip on the Capt's bolter... Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/168702-my-first-novamarine/#findComment-1991381 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commander Proteus Posted May 17, 2009 Share Posted May 17, 2009 I like both the schemes youve used. Aside from the red bolter clip, I think these would benefit from some Highlighting. Nothing really jumps out. It could be the picture/camera, but I think you should try the armor at least, as the smaller details might not need it. Good otherwise! Worthy of the B+C. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/168702-my-first-novamarine/#findComment-1991398 Share on other sites More sharing options...
JEFF4i Posted May 18, 2009 Author Share Posted May 18, 2009 Yeah, I had no idea what I had in mind when I did the red clip, lol I did some mild highlighting, but this was taken with my camera phone, so not the best on detail. I'm going to touch up the highlighting a bit more, and definately change that clip. Ha! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/168702-my-first-novamarine/#findComment-1991520 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuchinawa Posted May 18, 2009 Share Posted May 18, 2009 :P Yeah I can see it now. Cap: "Hell and damnnation I have run out of blessed ammo for my Bolter" Space Marine: "Sir, More ammo" <Tosses a clip over> Cap: "What is this!?! The clip is not red! It is boltgun metal! I cannot use this! With me brothers Charge!" And so on... But I also have on more nitpicky thing You sorta lose the writing on the banner. I suggest a lighter color so it would stand out a little more. But great job! Keep it up. I look forward to more. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/168702-my-first-novamarine/#findComment-1991647 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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