Lord Draco Posted June 6, 2009 Share Posted June 6, 2009 Hello! this is my submission for 'Fear the Alien' the writing compo that BL are doing. It has a Synopsis and numbers at about 967 words. Really need so feedback to make it as good as possible. Thanks! Shadows in the void By J Henderson Synopsis The Storey is set on a space hulk and follows Captain Decimus Macian of the Mechinus Tempus Chapter as he tries to break out of a Dark Eldar ambush and save his fleet. The Mechinus Tempus are travailing with an Adeptus Mechanicus Exploratory fleet when they come across a space hulk. Macian is sent aboard to investigate the ship. However it turns out to be a deadly ambush by the Dark Eldar and as Mandrakes assault Macian on board the hulk, Dark Eldar ships attack the fleet. After fighting his way clear of the Mandrakes, Macian flies a small imperial carrier found in the hanger of the hulk. They land on board the capital ship of the Dark Eldar and fight their way to the bridge to kill its commander. With their leader dead, the Dark Eldar retreat and the fleet are saved. Note: Just been told that i cant post this online :) il leave the synopsis up though Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/170405-my-submission-for-fear-the-alien/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kadaeux Posted June 6, 2009 Share Posted June 6, 2009 Can I have a link to this comp? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/170405-my-submission-for-fear-the-alien/#findComment-2013016 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Draco Posted June 6, 2009 Author Share Posted June 6, 2009 here you go http://forum.blpublishing.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=11868 Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/170405-my-submission-for-fear-the-alien/#findComment-2013033 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kadaeux Posted June 6, 2009 Share Posted June 6, 2009 Thanks matey, and good luck to yourself. Your's looks good, me i'm going to do Necrons myself :pinch: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/170405-my-submission-for-fear-the-alien/#findComment-2013042 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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