TemplarMathias Posted June 28, 2009 Share Posted June 28, 2009 The first thread is here I took in all suggestions that I could and I appreciate all of the input. Here is what I've come up with. I know the pics are a little dark but you should still be able to see the pose. http://i724.photobucket.com/albums/ww246/mwshepherd86/100_2986.jpg http://i724.photobucket.com/albums/ww246/mwshepherd86/100_2988.jpg http://i724.photobucket.com/albums/ww246/mwshepherd86/100_2989.jpg All comments and criticisms are more then welcome. Thank you very much for your time! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/172043-updated-first-templar/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terminatorinhell Posted June 28, 2009 Share Posted June 28, 2009 I like the pose but it looks like he's running at the foe with the fake finger gun thingy :unsure: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/172043-updated-first-templar/#findComment-2033351 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tarrandus Posted June 28, 2009 Share Posted June 28, 2009 The GS work is great, but the pose seems a little odd. His left hand just doesn't mesh with what he's doing. It looks like he's sprinting, or taking a running leap. Why is he pointing at something? You can't possibly run with your army out pointing. Its just doesn't look natural. His legs seem slightly off to me as well. It looks like one is pushing off, and the other is landing. I suggest you rotate the left leg more underneath the figure. It makes him look like he is jumping more vertically, rather than leaping horizontally. http://i31.photobucket.com/albums/c364/Carryoka/marinejump.png Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/172043-updated-first-templar/#findComment-2033430 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marshal Rohr Posted June 28, 2009 Share Posted June 28, 2009 GS on the hand is good, the legs are rough. The pose looks a bit awkward as well, a little too Angry Marine. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/172043-updated-first-templar/#findComment-2033551 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TemplarMathias Posted June 28, 2009 Author Share Posted June 28, 2009 Thanks for the input so far everybody. The feel I was trying to for is that he is taking leaping bounds down the battlefield toward the enemy. The reason for the finger is that he has singled out his target to let it know the world of hurt that is coming its way. I know if I need to explain it then it probably still needs work lol. Everyon please continue to post all input is welcome and helpful. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/172043-updated-first-templar/#findComment-2033558 Share on other sites More sharing options...
saadeath Posted June 28, 2009 Share Posted June 28, 2009 I like it, mainly because it gives a cartoonish feel, i gues because of the pose. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/172043-updated-first-templar/#findComment-2033883 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godfrey Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 I think it looks great as is. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/172043-updated-first-templar/#findComment-2034036 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Hadafix Posted June 29, 2009 Share Posted June 29, 2009 There should be at least one of these guys in every Crusade squad. Good use of humour and modelling <_< Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/172043-updated-first-templar/#findComment-2034312 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warhorse47 Posted June 30, 2009 Share Posted June 30, 2009 Make one of your objective markers an outhouse and you are all set to totally destroy the concentration of any and all anal retentive uber gamers before the game even starts! I love iit by the way. Great job on the conversion. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/172043-updated-first-templar/#findComment-2034947 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TemplarMathias Posted June 30, 2009 Author Share Posted June 30, 2009 Thanks for the C&C everyone. I think I'm going to keep him as is. I am working on another that I will post soon. A bit of a superman punch with a power fist kinda deal, hopefully :devil: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/172043-updated-first-templar/#findComment-2036099 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dungar Posted July 1, 2009 Share Posted July 1, 2009 that looks pretty good how long did it take you to finish him ?? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/172043-updated-first-templar/#findComment-2037202 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TemplarMathias Posted July 2, 2009 Author Share Posted July 2, 2009 I didn't really keep track of time while working on it. I know I started it months ago but it lay untouched for most of that time. I probably have anywhere between 4 to 6 hours of actual work in him. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/172043-updated-first-templar/#findComment-2037335 Share on other sites More sharing options...
happe Posted July 4, 2009 Share Posted July 4, 2009 i really like it but for some reason i keep thinking he's chasing someone "stop that ork! he has my gum!" Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/172043-updated-first-templar/#findComment-2040129 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Loring Posted July 10, 2009 Share Posted July 10, 2009 I really like the model, excellent effort. The only comments I would have are on the posturing of the arm/hand. I think it would look more gnuine if his arm was more stretched out and his hand/wrist more pronated i.e. palm facing down. Palm in neutral looks more like you're imitating a pistol. Keep it up though, good work with GS! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/172043-updated-first-templar/#findComment-2046314 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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