hazardousZERO Posted November 27, 2009 Share Posted November 27, 2009 My chapter is being called the Forsaken Angels because 1 they don't follow the C:DA 2 the chapter master is one of the fallen but is still loyal 2 the emperor. The color is black armor, gold trim, scab red robes. Ive been collecting for about 2 years but 1 of those i was in Iraq Ive only been playing for about 3 months. I'm also working on a pre heresy world eaters army just because i love there rage and blood lust. I follow the C:SM my chapter master will b based on Calgar only pre heresy termi armor. Captain of my 2nd company is based off of Sicarius, 3rd company is Shrike 1st is Lysander. So pretty much im not unique in army list but the story is my own. what do you think. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/185856-the-forsaken-angels/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Mike Posted November 27, 2009 Share Posted November 27, 2009 I'll say it nicely before anyone hurts yer feelings. A little more depth, a little less l33t and maybe some punctuation, then i will start to worry about your models. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/185856-the-forsaken-angels/#findComment-2198011 Share on other sites More sharing options...
hazardousZERO Posted November 27, 2009 Author Share Posted November 27, 2009 Whatever like this is a English class im working on adding some fluff once i do maby then it will be up to your standards Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/185856-the-forsaken-angels/#findComment-2198013 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Nihm Posted November 27, 2009 Share Posted November 27, 2009 Whatever like this is a English class im working on adding some fluff once i do maby then it will be up to your standardsThere's no need to take offence, don't expect to receive good feedback if your post shows signs of little/no effort. There's also No chat or "leet" speak Do you have any models for us to see? or any plans on tying such a diverse force together? more details on the count-as? :) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/185856-the-forsaken-angels/#findComment-2198029 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vlad III Posted November 27, 2009 Share Posted November 27, 2009 Hard to form any kind of opinion with just that small bit of text. Show some models and the feedback will come. For fluff critiques post it in the Liber. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/185856-the-forsaken-angels/#findComment-2198032 Share on other sites More sharing options...
hazardousZERO Posted November 27, 2009 Author Share Posted November 27, 2009 OK point taken I'm working on pictures might take a few days scene it is my wife's camera. O yea im not really offended sorry if it came off that way. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/185856-the-forsaken-angels/#findComment-2198039 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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