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i just found out i lost all my objectives yesterday so i got to work making new ones, this is the one im having trouble on right now. its done but looks like its lacking. so i'd like some people to give me ideas on how to improve it.

 

http://s821.photobucket.com/albums/zz134/Vairocanum/DSC00061.jpg

http://s821.photobucket.com/albums/zz134/Vairocanum/DSC00062.jpg

http://s821.photobucket.com/albums/zz134/Vairocanum/DSC00063.jpg

http://s821.photobucket.com/albums/zz134/Vairocanum/DSC00067.jpg

 

ugh, i have no idea whats wrong with the pictures. i tried to upload them from flickr and it didnt work. then i tried uploading it to b and c before uploading here. if you cant see them then please go to my album instead. thanks.

 

**EDIT**

You were using this:

[img=http://s821.photob//s821.photobucket.com/albums/zz134/Vairocanum/?action=view&current=DSC00062.jpg]

 

when you should have been using:

[img=http://s821.photob//s821.photobucket.com/albums/zz134/Vairocanum/DSC00062.jpg]

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Photobuckets the best place to go mate.

 

I'm no expert, but it might be because the photos are too big. Or not the right kind of file. As I said, I've never had any problems with photobucket. You have to make sure you make your account public though.

 

After looking at the photos, it looks cool, though I've never seen chainswords as weapons you stab with to be honest.

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Photobuckets the best place to go mate.

 

I'm no expert, but it might be because the photos are too big. Or not the right kind of file. As I said, I've never had any problems with photobucket. You have to make sure you make your account public though.

 

After looking at the photos, it looks cool, though I've never seen chainswords as weapons you stab with to be honest.

 

thanks for the tip about photoshop, i just tried it and it still doesnt work.

 

and for the stabing thing, i got my inspiration from this blood angels graphic novel so i decided to trie it.

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Photobuckets the best place to go mate.

 

I'm no expert, but it might be because the photos are too big. Or not the right kind of file. As I said, I've never had any problems with photobucket. You have to make sure you make your account public though.

 

After looking at the photos, it looks cool, though I've never seen chainswords as weapons you stab with to be honest.

 

thanks for the tip about photoshop, i just tried it and it still doesnt work.

 

and for the stabing thing, i got my inspiration from this blood angels graphic novel so i decided to trie it.

You need to use the link listed under "Share this image": IMG Code

 

Example:

http://i821.photobucket.com/albums/zz134/Vairocanum/DSC00061.jpg

(quote me to see the correct link)

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i just finished another objective today. please give me your opinions on it.

 

http://s821.photobucket.com/albums/zz134/Vairocanum/DSC00076.jpg

http://s821.photobucket.com/albums/zz134/Vairocanum/DSC00078.jpg

http://s821.photobucket.com/albums/zz134/Vairocanum/DSC00077.jpg

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IMO, the main problem on the last one is that he seems to be still bleeding as a skeleton.

 

But, you have good ideas. :)

I would make the skull charred, like his face got seared off by a plasma or melta blast. That would explain the blood. Either that or make the blood look old and dried. I like the ideas!

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I made another space marine objective. its a space marine holding his lunch box waiting for someone to pick him up.

 

http://s821.photobucket.com/albums/zz134/Vairocanum/DSC00079.jpg

http://s821.photobucket.com/albums/zz134/Vairocanum/DSC00081.jpg

http://s821.photobucket.com/albums/zz134/Vairocanum/DSC00082.jpg

http://s821.photobucket.com/albums/zz134/Vairocanum/DSC00080.jpg

 

it somehow still looks lacking. please give me some ideas to improve it.

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@ brother grunt - you went to school in power armour? :D wouldn't wanna be a bully at your school. lol

 

other than that, change the blood on the second one for acid? or age the armour (extra weathering) and darken the blood, but still awesome objectives

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Yes, yes I did go to school in power armor. If you count football pads and helmet as power armor. :P lol

 

Now buy football since your from Alaska I assume you mean American football. Remember there are a lot of gamers from the UK and "football" too them is soccer to us. I like the objectives, especially the lunch box one. i might have too make something similar if you don't mind.

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Yes, yes I did go to school in power armor. If you count football pads and helmet as power armor. :lol: lol

 

Now buy football since your from Alaska I assume you mean American football. Remember there are a lot of gamers from the UK and "football" too them is soccer to us. I like the objectives, especially the lunch box one. i might have too make something similar if you don't mind.

it only makes sense. i mean american football is moslty played with your hands right? and "soccer" is played with your feet. lol.

ive never understood things like that. ha ha did you know that americans say aluminum instead of aluminium because when it was first shipped to america there was a typo on the label? serious no joke!(not being rude or hating or anything)

 

any way back on topic. i like the markers and im surprised no one has said "hahaha i like how there smurfs." yet

but there good and i would definately nase them and gravel them or something

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"hahaha i like how there smurfs."

 

:P

 

I like these guys, not love - they're not quite up to the quality I see here but they're good nonetheless - but like.

There's a certain quality about them that I like (Not just they they're smurfs :P ) and that's the simplicity.

 

Great work :P

 

Arenis

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