Ferrus Manus Posted February 20, 2010 Share Posted February 20, 2010 I win gil, I get nine words :) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/187482-ia-the-sons-of-anubis/page/3/#findComment-2292329 Share on other sites More sharing options...
space wolf Posted February 20, 2010 Author Share Posted February 20, 2010 Fixed the coding, people shouldn't have that problem any more. Additionally I added a sentence or two in the regalia section, let me know what you think. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/187482-ia-the-sons-of-anubis/page/3/#findComment-2292647 Share on other sites More sharing options...
space wolf Posted April 19, 2010 Author Share Posted April 19, 2010 Ok, so I've decided to do some rewrites, but I need your help. As I've read this massive thing, It seems like there isn't enough mention of Dorn. All chapters revere their primarch, but it seems like he's just a minor player here. I'm looking for a way of smoothly integrating him in here. Additionally, is this thing still too long...too much detail? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/187482-ia-the-sons-of-anubis/page/3/#findComment-2368344 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ace Debonair Posted April 20, 2010 Share Posted April 20, 2010 Ok, so I've decided to do some rewrites, but I need your help. As I've read this massive thing, It seems like there isn't enough mention of Dorn. All chapters revere their primarch, but it seems like he's just a minor player here. I'm looking for a way of smoothly integrating him in here. Additionally, is this thing still too long...too much detail? Nah, it seems pretty good. Dorn gets more of a look in here than many DIY chapters give their primarch. Also, I'm not really sure what needs cutting down if the IA is too long. That's a tricky one. :tu: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/187482-ia-the-sons-of-anubis/page/3/#findComment-2370765 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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