Brother 'Ussell Posted January 12, 2010 Share Posted January 12, 2010 I was trying some different stuff and I thought I'd share. Sorry no chapter or squad markings. Sorry also about the funny size, at first I was thinking about turning him into some sort of Signature but then I sorta hit a wall creatively :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
c-wrex Posted January 12, 2010 Share Posted January 12, 2010 Very cool. I have two critiques. The first is that the head seems a little undersized, and the second is that the yellow you have used seems a little, uh, citrusy is a good word for it. Disclaimer: I have precisely ZERO artistic ability. I still feel you did a great job on this piece here though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ThirtySixNights Posted January 12, 2010 Share Posted January 12, 2010 I suggest that you downsize the shoulder pads about 10%, then proceed to get a more fruitful yellow colour, also squad markings/insignia would look nice too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Midas Posted January 12, 2010 Share Posted January 12, 2010 Its perfectly scaled for a space marine even if a little bright lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother 'Ussell Posted January 12, 2010 Author Share Posted January 12, 2010 Thanks for the comments, after reading them and getting a fresher perspective this morning I decided to change the picture a bit. The yellow was a bit bright even for my taste actually, however if you look around you'll see lots of people paint thier fists bright yellow. I have to say that now after changing him though I think he does look better this way, Thanks guys! I also decided to add the chapter and tactical squad markings too, the chapter marking isn't entirely visable but you get the picture right? Cheers! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WAR Posted January 12, 2010 Share Posted January 12, 2010 very nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dizzy-xc Posted January 12, 2010 Share Posted January 12, 2010 Yeah, that's bad ass. Now make it a full size pic with him stepping on a large ork warboss head. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
c-wrex Posted January 13, 2010 Share Posted January 13, 2010 Yeah, that's bad ass. Now make it a full size pic with him stepping on a large ork warboss head. What he said. Looks much cooler now, dude. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peck Posted January 13, 2010 Share Posted January 13, 2010 Looks good. My only problem's a technical one: there are a lot of artifacts in the image, around the edges et cetera. Could you not do a higher-quality render? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Capt. Lysander Posted January 13, 2010 Share Posted January 13, 2010 The bottom yellow is far better. Gratz on making an IF sig (sort of) that would make Dorn proud :P. The only thing, is that I feel the fingers are a bit too slim. Other then that, good work :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother 'Ussell Posted January 15, 2010 Author Share Posted January 15, 2010 Looks good. My only problem's a technical one: there are a lot of artifacts in the image, around the edges et cetera. Could you not do a higher-quality render? Here's a larger higher res version for you, click on the orangey "download" button on the left. LINK Thanks again for the comments and for looking, I hope to improve with each one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Capt. Lysander Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 Thanks for the link. Looking through your DA account: lots of great work there! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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