voo Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 This is my first Ultramarines Captain and the 4th space marine I painted. Hope you like it. Comments and Critic appreciated!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlamingDeth Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 Certainly not bad for your fourth model! There are a few things that you might take a look at though - The purity seals on the cape look a bit incomplete. If you gave the parchment on them an off white colouration and painted the wax seal bit another colour (usually red for Ultras), it'd look a bit better. The crossguard of the sword could probably stand to be a different colour to separate it from the blade. The crux termanatus belt buckle might look better if it was gold to match some of the other details. Keep on painting! There's promise here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
c-wrex Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 I think it looks pretty good. The boltgun and the power sword look quite nice, as does the tabard and the tassels. Well done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
An Angry Marine Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 That is actually very well done, concerning that you've only painted 4 models. There are two things, voo, that I enjoy about your captain; the colours aren't "all over the place" (which tends to be a common mistake with beginners in the hobby) and the colours are applied nice and cleanly over the model (again a very novice mistake as these beginners tend to rush the painting just to play). Just as CardinalVirtue stated, there are some changes and additions which should be added. But hey, it's one of your first GW models ever painted, it's not expected to be GD potential. Just continue painting, and, who knows, one day it may be GD potential. -Mac Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LardO'Blood Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 Its good, maybe more color on the banner? Also is it just my eyes or does he have orange streaks on his face? Excellent job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loken of the 10th Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 just a quick thing fourth company pauldron trim is green(?) not gold but otherwise very nice for a fourth model better then me!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LardO'Blood Posted January 19, 2010 Share Posted January 19, 2010 Where are you getting the fourth company?...Its the fourth marine hes painted, not the fourth company. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kuchinawa Posted January 20, 2010 Share Posted January 20, 2010 A good forth model. You got more courage then me to do a face at the level. Keep at it, and you'll get the hang of it in no time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
voo Posted January 20, 2010 Author Share Posted January 20, 2010 Thank you for your critic, I will try to implement them. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loken of the 10th Posted January 21, 2010 Share Posted January 21, 2010 Where are you getting the fourth company?...Its the fourth marine hes painted, not the fourth company. wooops :P either way great model Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Capt. Lysander Posted January 23, 2010 Share Posted January 23, 2010 It is extremely good for your 4th model! Mind I ask what you used for the gore? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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