Iago Posted March 26, 2010 Share Posted March 26, 2010 So here he is. I am trying to move away from "tabletop standard" and actually take more time to paint the models in my collection. The flash made the highlights look very extreme so did the white background. But the squad looks impressive up close, and compared to my other models... well I am happy to say the least. Constructive crit is appreciated.... Cheers http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r94/MarshalAugustine/Black%20Templars/Painting%20WIP/Squad%20V/DSCN0832.jpg http://i142.photobucket.com/albums/r94/MarshalAugustine/Black%20Templars/Painting%20WIP/Squad%20V/DSCN0829.jpg Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/196015-black-templar-multi-melta-marine/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeller Posted March 26, 2010 Share Posted March 26, 2010 perhaps wash the colored cables? maybe do a hazard stripe on the yellow one? the center of the MM's targeting sight looks plain. can you spiff that up a bit with the blue of the screen and maybe some thing light lines repsenting an image of some sort? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/196015-black-templar-multi-melta-marine/#findComment-2334899 Share on other sites More sharing options...
c-wrex Posted March 26, 2010 Share Posted March 26, 2010 My only gripe would be the faceplate. It looks kind, um... well... I'm not sure how to describe it. I guess it looks... Cartoony. The lense color over the face mask, I just don't like it. The rest of the model looks gorgeous though! I love your work, Iago! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/196015-black-templar-multi-melta-marine/#findComment-2335013 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iago Posted March 26, 2010 Author Share Posted March 26, 2010 yeah, i think the helmet is the only part i was not sure about on the model itself. You can also see my blog here on the bnC for more pics of stuff. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/196015-black-templar-multi-melta-marine/#findComment-2335086 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iago Posted March 28, 2010 Author Share Posted March 28, 2010 a bump. No more comments? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/196015-black-templar-multi-melta-marine/#findComment-2336694 Share on other sites More sharing options...
juckto Posted March 28, 2010 Share Posted March 28, 2010 Never use a flash to take a picture of models. Look through your camera manual to see what white balance options, if any, that it has. Try and get hold of some photo editing software - even Microsoft Picture Manager which comes on some computers has a colour balance tool. Hard to give any feedback on the model with small pics. Tidy up the edge of the base, maybe another highlight on the red so to match the starkness that you've got with the black. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/196015-black-templar-multi-melta-marine/#findComment-2336745 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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