NeroMasteroftheNovaGuard Posted May 29, 2010 Share Posted May 29, 2010 The Nova Guard "We fight not for ourselves, nor for our honor.We fight in his holy name so that the imperium may prosper..Mutants, heretic's, Xenos fear us for we are his wraith....We are his swords of vengance...we are his angels of death...We are the Nova guard!!" -Chapter Master Nero Claudius before the battle for Nova Prime. The Nova Guard are a 3rd founding chapter of unknown origin, founded during M30 by Chapter master Septium Rankor on the chapters home world Nova prime.Nova prime is a feral world in the Nova system located in the ghoul stars just before the blood moons of Thex prime, the planet is home to a population of 40million and is the chapters main recreating world along with all worlds of the Nova system. Chapter info Chapter home world:Nova Prime Population:40million Average travel time to Terra:30-months Chapter name:Nova Guard Founding legion:Unknown Current chapter master:Nero Claudius Home world:Nova prime Fortress monastery:Gates of Salvnar Main colors:Feneris Grey Battle cry:"To the death brothers! For the Emperor!" Battle Brother of the 3rd company Tell me what you think this is just a small amount of the work I have done so far, so more to come.. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/202789-nova-guard/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
RagingGriffon Posted May 29, 2010 Share Posted May 29, 2010 Well, there isn't much to go on... I think you meant "Emperor's wrath," not "wraith." We need more than they are a 3rd Founding Chapter based out of the Ghoul Stars with unknown heritage. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/202789-nova-guard/#findComment-2416907 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Mournival Posted May 29, 2010 Share Posted May 29, 2010 A couple of gramatical errors here and there, like recreating instead of recruiting, but altogether (for what little there is to judge) it has potential, though you need to flesh it out more. One recomendation that I would make is to read some of the indexi that are in the Liber Honouros Index, not that anyone expects such a high level from everyone (myself included, my first index was short, and not included in the Liber Honouros Index, my second a wip) but they are a good guidline, another good guide is well.... The Guide to DIYing. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/202789-nova-guard/#findComment-2417097 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacobius Posted May 29, 2010 Share Posted May 29, 2010 The first thing I thought of when you said their heritage was unknown was the Novamarines, a second founding successor to the Ultramarines, just a thought. As everyone else has said a little more info would be good :P Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/202789-nova-guard/#findComment-2417110 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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