Dread Claw

[Chaplain-Skylax]

CHAPTER 1

 

 

 

The Dread Claw flew through the void of space, all around defence fire from the loyalist Marine ship stabbed into the black depths. The Dread Claw rocked and bucked as it reached terminal Velocity, Arduc Snarled through his Mk IV helm, watching the Chronometer he growled in impatience as there was still a few kilo-meters to the enemy ship. “Relax Serge” Intoned a gruff deep voice in the hazy red light opposite Arduc; Arduc himself smiled and began intoning the Litanies of Hate. The owner of the gruff voice too joined in his mind reflecting back to his home world Mitheral Waters his hatred of the lap-dogs of his old chapter rising, They were attempting to board one of its frigates The Tranquil. He smiled to himself at the irony of the name even though he had served upon The Tranquil before his turning towards chaos; he had always thought the name absurd and rather stupid for a war-ship of its calibre. Arduc flicked a switch on the control panel in front of him, He looked across to the marine opposite him he was lost in thought. Typical thought Arduc, Mariak was getting Lucid in his old age, having been around since the “Turning” Mariak’s armour Just like Arduc’s was Blue on the right and silver on the left however Unlike their Loyalist past it had a red tinge and was much darker, so if the angle was right the armour would give off a red glow.

 

 

The Dread claw along with the many the Iorgun sun disgorged from its Dread Claw tubes Impacted upon the hull of the tranquil The melta cutters and the las cutters sheared through the hull of the tranquil goblets of admantium floated into space around the Pods, after burrowing through around 10 meters of hull plating the pods hatches open a Hundred Unforgiving Marines dropped down into the tranquil’s Corridors Bolters barking and chain swords whirling the Invaders desiccated anything in their paths on their way to the bridge and other control centres. Within the first 5 minutes around three hundred chapter serfs had died to the loss of three, Unforgiven. Arduc smiled within his Helm it had been many months within the warp and many months without battle, He relished it and enjoyed the killing, Serfs of the Ice hawks where dying in droves as he and ninety nine other marines rampaged through the lower decks of The Tranquil.

 

I will probably finish this off sometime.

Just a little story i wrote when i was bored...enjoy

C&C welcome.

Chaplain-Skylax

 

EDIT: Ok so trying to indent (Failed) ah-well Added the Italics and i split it up so i's not a wall of text.

[Lord Howland Greywolf]

Nice, although a little bit of good ol' "wall of text".

[Chaplain-Skylax]

Well in word it was Laid out a little better but B&C hasn't heard of Indents, I'll Change it around a bit today make a little bit more attractive.