ultramarine of death Posted July 23, 2010 Share Posted July 23, 2010 It is a space marine chapter champion: I havent quite finished him yet... like i havent mounted him on a base but i didnt want to put him in the W.I.P one. Hope you like, Charlie Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/207078-my-golden-demon-entry-2010/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
ironbear Posted July 23, 2010 Share Posted July 23, 2010 i think to be in with a shout you need to blend some more highlights up on the armour Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/207078-my-golden-demon-entry-2010/#findComment-2470042 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sixtyten Posted July 23, 2010 Share Posted July 23, 2010 I really like that golden helmet, nice work. If youre going to enter GD I persume that youd like some feedback. His right shortsword looks a bit messy. Just clean it up a bit and it will be brilliant. From what I have seen form the young bloods it seems that the judges look for cleanness and inovation, for the most part. I might be wrong but thats the feeling I get when looing at the winners. So just take a pencil and clean up all those small small misstakes and you will be left with an extraordinary looking model. His right shortsword looks a bit messy. Just clean it up a bit, like the dark line just at the sword/blade edge, and it will be brilliant. for example. Second. Take a wile and look at a lot at other GD winners, Young bloods and others as well. Pick up some ideas wich you like and that arent that teq hard and test them. When youre happy with the result, apply some of them at your UM model. Also think of what youre really good at and use it more As I said at the start - your gold is really good all over. As is the red youre using. Maby do the purity seals seal in that red, ei a pinch darker. Keep it up and good luck B) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/207078-my-golden-demon-entry-2010/#findComment-2470047 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ultramarine of death Posted July 23, 2010 Author Share Posted July 23, 2010 thanks for that Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/207078-my-golden-demon-entry-2010/#findComment-2470145 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uncle Mel Posted July 24, 2010 Share Posted July 24, 2010 Good luck! I do suggest you write some text on his scroll on the left shoulder though. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/207078-my-golden-demon-entry-2010/#findComment-2470819 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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