Ethnic Minority Posted August 31, 2010 Share Posted August 31, 2010 Ben Kingsley(?) Marine forges a path http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2010/243/4/2/spearhead_40k_by_alfaxt-d2xpgpn.jpg Comments and criticism please! This is my first time doing a.. uhh.. "sophisticated" background. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaptermaster Graymantle Posted August 31, 2010 Share Posted August 31, 2010 Wow, that is very, very cool! The perspective and the way you lead the viewer through the image using the canyon-like trench is very good, and I love the background of the image. I would have liked to see some more detail on the Marines in the front and maybe a bit more happening over on the right, but all in all it is a great image. Now I want to go colour it! Well done sir! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ethnic Minority Posted August 31, 2010 Author Share Posted August 31, 2010 I agree with the quality of the front marines, I think I could have done better on the one on the right. Here is my revision, adding back what I cropped out and decreasing the contrast, which ruined the titan for me.. http://fc03.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2010/243/9/3/spearhead_40k_by_alfaxt-d2xpgpn.jpg also, if you want to colour it, be my guest! I am no good with colours at the moment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordOrdGermany Posted September 1, 2010 Share Posted September 1, 2010 really great I like that :tu: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
S. Bloodhowl Posted September 1, 2010 Share Posted September 1, 2010 Second one looks better mate, especially the Titan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robotbeef Posted September 1, 2010 Share Posted September 1, 2010 Wow that's fantastic! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Mick Posted September 1, 2010 Share Posted September 1, 2010 Great piece of art, great job :) . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaptermaster Graymantle Posted September 1, 2010 Share Posted September 1, 2010 i don't know! - I think I liked the first version better. Both versions are good though and stand well in back and white. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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