Chaos1976 Posted September 19, 2010 Share Posted September 19, 2010 I'm relatively new to the 40k universe, but I didn't like the restrictions of playing as an established Chapter. So I decided to try my hand at my own Chapter. I really don't have any real fluff for them other than the following: Chapter name: Crimson Wasps Gene Seed: White Scars Combat Doctrine: Fast Attack *Updated color schemes 10/3/2010* Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/211529-yet-another-diy-chapter-looking-for-critiques/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Octavulg Posted September 20, 2010 Share Posted September 20, 2010 That color scheme is incredibly busy, and hurts my head. Pare it down. As a general rule of thumb, you're better off using a maximum of three colors in the painter (in any quantity, that is). Anything else hurts the head. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/211529-yet-another-diy-chapter-looking-for-critiques/#findComment-2516533 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master Gabriel Macleod Posted September 20, 2010 Share Posted September 20, 2010 I agree with Octavulg, the scheme is too busy the red and black look fine but the yellow has to go. You want to have a scheme that is pleasing to the eye and not too busy. two to three colors max no more. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/211529-yet-another-diy-chapter-looking-for-critiques/#findComment-2516547 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chaos1976 Posted September 20, 2010 Author Share Posted September 20, 2010 How dis looking now? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/211529-yet-another-diy-chapter-looking-for-critiques/#findComment-2516567 Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightrawenII Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 Well, it's not bad.... but look on the BA successors, 99% of them are red, black or combination of the previous colours. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/211529-yet-another-diy-chapter-looking-for-critiques/#findComment-2518388 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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