Brother Tiberus Posted September 20, 2010 Share Posted September 20, 2010 Well, this is my first painting submission, so I hope everyone likes it. Any C & C is most appreciated and welcome, I always want to improve/grow as a hobbyist :D So my idea was to have a sinister green marble effect happening on the stonework of the piece, while having the chaos star still stand out among the ruins. I feel the whole model stands out because of the light rocky outcrops that seem to frame the model. That's my opinion. Please let me know yours! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Firepower Posted September 20, 2010 Share Posted September 20, 2010 Hehe, at first glance all i was thinking was "Where are the skulls?" I wasn't expecting the rubble itself to be the skulls, as i had something a bit more Khorney in mind by the title :wacko: Nicely done. The green marbling (if that's a word?) of the black is nicely executed. My one critique/suggestion would be to try dirtying up the bottom of all the marble a bit. The highest parts are shiny, as I'd expect, but I wouldn't expect the half buried and broken ones to still be so perfectly clean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Muller Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 It needs dust and dirt, and the marble could really use some matte varnish to remove the oily finish. The Marble effect looks great though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Tiberus Posted September 22, 2010 Author Share Posted September 22, 2010 Thanks for the comments. I'm quite proud of the marbling effect :) I'll look at taking a brush to it again to 'dirty' it up a bit and make it seem rough around the edges. I'll think about the matte finish though, as I've had some bad experiences with that in the past. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vulkan454 Posted September 22, 2010 Share Posted September 22, 2010 It looks very good, but a little necron like with the green effect. One think that you really need to do is paint the inside of the skulls eyes black. (see the last pic) Other than that well done. Vulkan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inquisitor_Lensoven Posted September 23, 2010 Share Posted September 23, 2010 looks to clean if you know what i mean, try to dirty it up a bit. but otherwise amazing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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