Wolfy1322 Posted October 22, 2010 Author Share Posted October 22, 2010 So, largely, number of people knowing stuff and spelling, grammer errors are the main issues. I'll work on those issues soon. Anything else you can think of/see/point out? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/213239-blood-wolves/page/4/#findComment-2542869 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfy1322 Posted October 27, 2010 Author Share Posted October 27, 2010 Need some help on the last line of this. It just doesn't feel right. I'm pretty sure it's the wording, particularly the last 8 words. Unofficial HistoryThe Blood Wolves were created through the use of Sanguinius' geneseed. The High Lords commisioned this experiment with the understanding of several members of the Inquisition. The Blood Wolves were trained by a Cadre of Imperial Fists, explaining the reasoning of claiming that they were in fact Imperial Fists, despite having no connection whatsoever to Rogal Dorn. Several members of the Inqusition have been keeping tabs on the Blood Wolves, outside of those few who are aware of the experiment. It is unknown if any other members of the Inquisition are aware of the experiment, or if they have told the Blood Angels, though, to date, no indication of such knowledge has been forthcoming. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/213239-blood-wolves/page/4/#findComment-2546260 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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