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Okay I re-read through it a bit. In my sleep deprived and in pain state I can say I am satisfied it has been dealt with properly... Not so sure what I'll think tomorrow.

 

Well, that proves it's good enough to pass the 'sleep-deprived agony test', at least. B)

I'll quote the relevant, explain-y lines for Maluk's attacking the Red Fortress for ease of future reading.

 

It was through a combination of Maluk's ruthlessness and Keja's deadly insight that the Rift Lords were successful in prosecuting their hidden war and bringing glory to their Dark Gods.

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But Maluk was always driven by the spectre of ambition, and longed to strike a telling blow against the Imperium.

 

However, as the battle marched on, it became harder and harder to control the Rift Lords - each one eager to kill in the name of their Gods. Eventually even Maluk gave in to the siren promises of victory and glory, and he issued the order to openly attack, despite Keja's warnings.

 

...And that should, in my view, cover it. ^_^

Which counts for nothing, 'cause I'm heavily biased in my own favour. :)

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