Codicier Lucion Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 Pointless. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214969-pandoras-end/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
astartes88 Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 haha oh yeah!! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214969-pandoras-end/#findComment-2560666 Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Normish Posted November 12, 2010 Share Posted November 12, 2010 Hooray! Death to the Xenos! Although one mistake: Then they are a hybrid of Xenos and Malleus. Malleus means hammer, though I think I see where the problem is: Ordo Hereticus: Order of the Heretics, kills Heretics Ordo Xenos: Order of the Sliens, kills Aliens Ordo Malleus: Order of the Hammer, kills Daemons Also, did you really have to destroy Terra? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214969-pandoras-end/#findComment-2560745 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Codicier Lucion Posted November 12, 2010 Author Share Posted November 12, 2010 Malleus means hammer, though I think I see where the problem is:Ordo Hereticus: Order of the Heretics, kills Heretics Ordo Xenos: Order of the Sliens, kills Aliens Ordo Malleus: Order of the Hammer, kills Daemons Also, did you really have to destroy Terra? Ah, never did quite understand the name. What's the High Imperial name for Daemon? Also, Earth is just the Earth from the Avatar universe, it's mentioned later on as sharing Terra's ancestral name, nothing more. Glad you both enjoyed it though Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214969-pandoras-end/#findComment-2560801 Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Normish Posted November 13, 2010 Share Posted November 13, 2010 Also, Earth is just the Earth from the Avatar universe, it's mentioned later on as sharing Terra's ancestral name, nothing more. Glad you both enjoyed it though Ah, I'm relieved. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214969-pandoras-end/#findComment-2560825 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bjorn Firewalker Posted November 23, 2010 Share Posted November 23, 2010 I admit I felt a sadistic glee at reading the story. (Goddamn Hollywood liberals who think the lives of plants and animals, are more valuable than that of human beings.) I advise you to proofread your work before posting, to avoid errors like this: The great clans had scattered before them, the greatest of their warriors effortlessly slain the automata. I think you meant "The great clans had scattered before them, the greatest of their warriors effortlessly slain by the automata." Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214969-pandoras-end/#findComment-2570179 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Codicier Lucion Posted November 23, 2010 Author Share Posted November 23, 2010 I admit I felt a sadistic glee at reading the story. (Goddamn Hollywood liberals who think the lives of plants and animals, are more valuable than that of human beings.) I advise you to proofread your work before posting, to avoid errors like this:The great clans had scattered before them, the greatest of their warriors effortlessly slain the automata. I think you meant "The great clans had scattered before them, the greatest of their warriors effortlessly slain by the automata." I do every chance I get, but proof reading has always been a long time weakness. Thanks for pointing the error out though, let me know if you see any more. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/214969-pandoras-end/#findComment-2570467 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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