Incarnation decided

[Emperor's Indignation]

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++++ A mind with out purpose wanders in dark places ++++

and looses all sence of reality

A moment of blasphemy spawns a life time of heresy

Even in death I still serve

I have waited long for this day

Origins

Homeworld

Beliefs

Combat doctrine

Organisation

Title

Title

Gene - seed

Battle cry

Title

[Ecritter]

Well, color scheme looks good.

[Bjorn Firewalker]

Love the color scheme; very regal, like knights and nobility of old.

[Emperor's Indignation]

it's not easy picking at bits trying to make everything work together when ideas are thin on the ground, the more i look the harder it gets to come up with scanable material

[NightrawenII]

I'd consider a few of the lesser used loyalist chapters wether it will be one of the progenitors or one if any of their successors. But when to bring them into existance on the time line that would make sense maybe somewhere around but no latter than the third to fourth foundings.

Linky, just saying. ^_^

 

The Gothic sector is bad idea:

#A Gothic War is well-documented event in W40k lore.

#B Current chapter strength: depleted after run in with tyranid hive fleet splinter from kraken Gothic sector is the Segmentum Obscuras, so it's unlikely for your Chapter to run into Tyranid fleet.

 

Ehm, your Chapter prefered enemy is... well... everyone?

 

The jungle is lush with a thick canopy with several tribes that regularlly quarl between themselves and other tribes...

This sentence doesn't make sense.

 

Chaplin was/is famous comic, the Space Marine's preacher is called CHAPLAIN. ::Sorry, but this typo is tiresome.::

 

The two main malfunctions in the gene - seed are the sus - an - membrane and the betcher's gland, the chapters Apothecaries are looking for a way to rectify this current problem.

The Imperial Fists don't see this as a problem, in fact they don't give a frag about such useless organs. Just saying.

 

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The following is my personal interpretation of IA:

 

Origins

is section for introduction of your Chapter. In this section you tell us about the Chapter in summary. The following sections just expand these facts.

 

Homeworld

The description of the planet should invoke some image in mind of reader.

It's place where you introduce the theme of the Chapter and emphasise the major traits.

 

Belief

is about the way of thinking of the Chapter. How do they see a W40k universe? What drives them? For what do they fight? What are the traits the marines held in great esteem? etc. etc.

 

Combat Doctrine

in short, What is prefered way of fighting? What is the Chapter behaviour on the battlefied? What is the Chapter view of warfare? Expand.

 

Organisation

We know how the Codex structure looks like, tells us about difference.

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I hope this help.

[Argon]

I like the color scheme, but the name isn't doing very much for me.

 

You might want to look at the dictionary definition of indignant.

 

Yeah, it really doesn't work well for a chapter of 7 foot tall superhuman beings created for nothing but war and killing.

[Emperor's Indignation]

I was trying to use my own Indignance with things in general, :) but i can never get them to go on to paper or in this case computer it all churns round in my head all the possible, impossible so many scenarioes and what if's.

 

and just when did i mention chaplin

[Emperor's Indignation]

that is all i feel towards those who don't understand difference, so i try and turn it into a marine army that takes that feeling and turn it to pure hatred, bitterness and anger and exact it on all xenos and heretics. :)

[Emperor's Indignation]

As it is quite clear that I have missed the point of the IA completely and I seem to be incapable to make any sence in what I put down, but I will keep trying but it will never come to be :( :tu: ;)

[Hubernator]

Well lets take a step back, find out what we know. So lets see:

 

- We have a name: Knights Indignant. Slightly odd choice for a name but I'm sure you can help explain why.

- I'm not sure which colour scheme you're going for. Either one doesn't fully converge "Knights Indignant" to me. Perhaps you can try something like... black shoulderpads and backpack, silver everywhere else. Then Red or Blue, maybe yellow for the eagle and eyes. Nice and simple :)

- 3rd Founding, theres some info. So the Chapter is well established.

- Any Chapter Master or character details aren't really needed.

- Homeworld is Tartereas... sounds like Tarterus with a new ending :P That and what is this "new sector"? And can we have more details about the homeworld and it's people? Perhaps some practises or their lifestyle.

- The splitting into groups would more fall under the Combat Doctrine. That and you haven't given much detail other than "confusing the enemy". More details on this please?

- Your Organisation is about how your Chapter or Companies are organised - i.e. what is in them. The fleet isn't so important.

- Beliefs are a start, then again what you've written should be in the Combat Doctrine as well. Beliefs are more about what the Chapter thinks. How do they view the Emperor? How do they view others? Any unique views on certain things?

- Geneseed; do you have one? If you're struggling, go Ultra and keep it simple.

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The ''New sector'' bit is temp as for gene-seed that is currently in debate and for the colour it was just a thought (dangerous) but i've been thinking up a few more names but it's not getting any where fast, as for the other parts there all under construction.

[Emperor's Indignation]

The name Grey Guards does'nt make you quake but their stone hearts and unremorsefull effectivness will they set about their tasks a moving tide of grey armour with unshakeable resolve and steady foot fall they repel any oppressor be it renegade guard or traitor marines' nothing seems to faze them, created to bolster any part of the known galaxy where resistance was at it's highest

 

It's all i can think of can't decide which lesser known chapter to use as parent

[Ecritter]

Keep the original name, its fine.

 

Just because someone doesn't like it doesn't mean you can't still use it. Its something you'll have to learn around here.

[Argon]

It's all i can think of can't decide which lesser known chapter to use as parent

 

 

You don't have to use a lesser-known chapter, unless you happen to sort of like them.

 

 

Also, while I'm still not a fan of "Knights Indignant", in the end it's your chapter and you can go with whatever you feel like.

[Emperor's Indignation]

their hearts beat on dead note, they beat to live but not to feel

 

 

I've been thinking of a name change and different parent chapter anyway that would better suit the background and

the rest of the setup, I was trying to make them not look too imposing but would relay more on reputation alone

for being fierce and unrelenting to give the enemy a pasting that they'd be reeling from for years to come.

The new symbol will take a while something that would stand for defiance, resilience to give no ground and

show no quarter. As I've said before the Ultramarines have somewhere in the region of 23-24 successor chapters

plus any others that have been successed off them as well so maybe I could give one of the other chapters a little

heads up and give them a successor or two. I can't off the top of my head pick one that apart from the the

Black Templars who are pious and zealous beyond the call of duty to stand up for what they believe in and

see it through to the sometimes bitter end.

[Emperor's Indignation]

The chapter will willingly fight along side guard armies that field ogryns and see nothing wrong with them being part of the struggle they draw the line at that, anything that has the stink of chaos or genestealer cult then there is no quarter given.

[Emperor's Indignation]

so there we have it the colour scheme but a name to suit will be tricky, something along the lines of stalwart or stubborn

[Emperor's Indignation]

never mind

[Emperor's Indignation]

Could a marine chapter wish to remain anonymous seeing themselves as being unworthy of having an insignia or baring any mark at all feeling they have to earn them rather than be given so they just turn up do the task at hand collect their losses and leave

 

 

 

Both examples are crusading style chapters so maybe the templar cross behind the wooden cross

 

 

name 1: Cross of penitence

 

insignia is a cross being held back by a pair of skeletal arms

" The cross bare heavy" / "The cross is ours to bare alone"

( chanted )

name2: Hand of penance

 

insignia is a skeletal hand holding the cross by the cross members between its

index and third fingers

 

" The hand holds us back" / " we seek penance"

(chanted)

[Rider-75]

Knights Penitant?

 

Though there would need to be a reason for such a name in the background.

Maybe it's not their original name, but one they have adopted after some percieved failure.

 

Maybe they were originally the "Knights of the Emperor's Wrath" or "Knights Obscura" if they are based in Segmentum Obscura

[soddinnutter]

Knights Penitant?

Though there would need to be a reason for such a name in the background.

Maybe it's not their original name, but one they have adopted after some percieved failure.

Maybe they were originally the "Knights of the Emperor's Wrath" or "Knights Obscura" if they are based in Segmentum Obscura

Knights Obscura! For the love of the God they must be called Knights Obscura.

Pics very related!

[Emperor's Indignation]

I'll dwell on the matter.

[Rider-75]

obscura is from the latin "dark"

 

they'd be dark knights, not rasta knights <_<

[soddinnutter]

Obscura is a drug in the 40k universe. It has been described as having similar effects to some cheap weed.

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now to think of a parent chapter that would suit the successors history