Alphz Posted February 16, 2011 Share Posted February 16, 2011 I'd like to chime in that I enjoyed it too. The comments of unfluffiness are really taking the universe too seriously, as this is quite pleasant and doesn't really hit you with OMG how the hell would that happen ever. Its more like 'well thats quite unlikely' but in a universe THIS MASSIVE and FORTY THOUSAND years in the future, I think it can nudge in one of the crevices. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/218622-the-unwanted/page/2/#findComment-2661310 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generating Random Name... Posted February 16, 2011 Share Posted February 16, 2011 I liked it also, but think it could do with being it more subtle in places because it's a good concept. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/218622-the-unwanted/page/2/#findComment-2661526 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Losfer Werds Posted February 16, 2011 Share Posted February 16, 2011 Not even kittens?! Unfathomable. While it does seem to lack credibility its not entirely a bad idea. People, myself included sometimes, are way too hung up on the 40k fluff to remember that this game is supported by the players and not everything that GW writes has to be gospel. Your game, your rules. I say keep running with it and see what develops. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/218622-the-unwanted/page/2/#findComment-2661585 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Russ Brother 92 Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 tbh I really enjoyed it, I liked the characters even if I thought the findind/keeping of them is a little unlikely, but hey it's imagination and creative :lol: so it's all good, I would like more info about how they work/find out about the various conflicts and also about the other 30+ guys/gals in the crew - once again would probs call it a Brand/Brotherhood or something similar ^_^ I am admittedly now thinking of actually writing the story about a squad of Black Templars I started a few years back haha mainly around the idea of Grimaldus and a small brotherhood of his protectors but them being especially hard. Also I love how you have one marine who despises technology and is a complete technophobic in the same force as various forms of machinery - really gives some great plausibles of storyline and deployment reasons, such as one being automatically deployed behind enemy lines so he could happily rampage destroy the tech of the enemy, whilst staying far enough away for his technomagi brother to not worry about the precious Omnissiah = :lol: :P ;) LOVE IT! ;) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/218622-the-unwanted/page/2/#findComment-2661709 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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