Plague Angel Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 urban dictionary Not surprising. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220694-wip-the-crimson-tide/page/2/#findComment-2635870 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ferrata Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 Okay, I think we've discussed the name enough now - lets leave it at that. To Rolltide it is a football? team. I would suggeset calling your captains player names etc as you might fall into the trap of this coming across more of a joke chapter than a serious chapter. Even if it is just mixing it up a bit to make it different. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220694-wip-the-crimson-tide/page/2/#findComment-2636081 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Juan Juarez Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 # Eleanor Rigby.. Picks up the rice in a church where a wedding has been... # Okay, I think we've discussed the name enough now - lets leave it at that. Can I just have my say..? It isn't a great name, but neither is it a terrible name.. Like "Star Hippos of Orion" would be. That said, it's the dudes choice and it appears to have been made. EDIT: Forgot my obligatory singing, dammit! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220694-wip-the-crimson-tide/page/2/#findComment-2636085 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rolltide Posted January 27, 2011 Author Share Posted January 27, 2011 I think its been pretty well proven that the name is not an issue. I reposted the entire thing after making changes based on peoples suggestions, and if I could get some thoughts on that, it'd be great. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220694-wip-the-crimson-tide/page/2/#findComment-2636288 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Juan Juarez Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 Glaringly obvious thing: Battlecry - Should I fall in battle, I'll stand watch until you join me. Next time you're having a knife fight, try shouting that before someone stabs you*.. It's less a battlecry and more - well to be honest it has a vague air of romance about it. *I do not officially endorse knife fighting or the stabbing of people. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220694-wip-the-crimson-tide/page/2/#findComment-2636309 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rolltide Posted January 27, 2011 Author Share Posted January 27, 2011 Glaringly obvious thing: Battlecry - Should I fall in battle, I'll stand watch until you join me. Next time you're having a knife fight, try shouting that before someone stabs you*.. It's less a battlecry and more - well to be honest it has a vague air of romance about it. *I do not officially endorse knife fighting or the stabbing of people. I changed that, but I am new here. Instead of reposting the whole thing, should I have just edited it instead? I'm guessing that would make it easier, huh... Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220694-wip-the-crimson-tide/page/2/#findComment-2636322 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Juan Juarez Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 Edit is your friend, yup. Basically, anytime you redraft or make ammendments alter the first post - which should contain your compelte IA eventually - as this means we don't have to scroll through dozens or more posts just to find it. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220694-wip-the-crimson-tide/page/2/#findComment-2636331 Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightrawenII Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 They also use bolters and chainswords. Erm, why 'also'? The Bolter and Chainsword are basic weapons of Astartes. Edit is your friend, yup. Basically, anytime you redraft or make ammendments alter the first post - which should contain your compelte IA eventually - as this means we don't have to scroll through dozens or more posts just to find it. Said the guy, whose Index Astartes is dispersed across the time and place of 7 pages long thread. :) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220694-wip-the-crimson-tide/page/2/#findComment-2636342 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Juan Juarez Posted January 27, 2011 Share Posted January 27, 2011 Edit is your friend, yup. Basically, anytime you redraft or make ammendments alter the first post - which should contain your compelte IA eventually - as this means we don't have to scroll through dozens or more posts just to find it. Said the guy, whose Index Astartes is dispersed across the time and place of 7 pages long thread. :) Noooooooooooooooooo! Everything was consolidated into Post #1, thank you very much! Just because you haven't visited lately, doesn't mean it didn't change :P Only thing that didn't go into #1 was Combat Doc, because that wasn't finished before the IA got mauled. So consider these hideous, thread derailing, allegations refuted. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220694-wip-the-crimson-tide/page/2/#findComment-2636349 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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