Marshal Renatus Posted February 17, 2011 Author Share Posted February 17, 2011 Woohoo! 900 views. Anymore C&C out there, or am I in a holding pattern for the Librarium to return to functionality? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220906-ia-sky-sentinels/page/4/#findComment-2661681 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Juan Juarez Posted February 17, 2011 Share Posted February 17, 2011 You're in a "CJJ is working up the energy to ravage critique it.." pattern. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220906-ia-sky-sentinels/page/4/#findComment-2661954 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marshal Renatus Posted February 17, 2011 Author Share Posted February 17, 2011 Que bueno! C&C always welcome. Ravaging...er...less so, but I suppose still beneficial. :angry: Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220906-ia-sky-sentinels/page/4/#findComment-2662193 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marshal Renatus Posted February 19, 2011 Author Share Posted February 19, 2011 A few modest improvements and the removal of one glaring duplication (doh!). C&C welcome. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220906-ia-sky-sentinels/page/4/#findComment-2664669 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marshal Renatus Posted February 21, 2011 Author Share Posted February 21, 2011 Triple post...but it's a 1,000 hits!! Most anything I've ever put on here has gotten, lol. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220906-ia-sky-sentinels/page/4/#findComment-2666186 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Juan Juarez Posted February 21, 2011 Share Posted February 21, 2011 There would have been a post from me, except I haven't posted anything anywhere recently that wasn't two lines or less.. One day I promise to critique it, honest. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220906-ia-sky-sentinels/page/4/#findComment-2666339 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marshal Renatus Posted February 23, 2011 Author Share Posted February 23, 2011 I've read through it now a dozen times, as is, and it seems to flow pretty well to me. Does anyone, *anyone*, out there have any feedback on this beast? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220906-ia-sky-sentinels/page/4/#findComment-2668967 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Generating Random Name... Posted February 23, 2011 Share Posted February 23, 2011 Hmm, seems good to me. Just one sentence in the beliefs/recruitment bit it says "Recently blessed by the MotF" or something similar, i don't think the MotF woud bless stuff, seems more like a chaplains job to me, although maybe appeasing the Machine spirit or something similar. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220906-ia-sky-sentinels/page/4/#findComment-2669001 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marshal Renatus Posted February 23, 2011 Author Share Posted February 23, 2011 Hmm, seems good to me. Just one sentence in the beliefs/recruitment bit it says "Recently blessed by the MotF" or something similar, i don't think the MotF woud bless stuff, seems more like a chaplains job to me, although maybe appeasing the Machine spirit or something similar. - Thanks. Now that you mention it, I agree. I adusted the wording a skosh. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220906-ia-sky-sentinels/page/4/#findComment-2669014 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marshal Renatus Posted March 2, 2011 Author Share Posted March 2, 2011 :fakenopic: Â *weekly bump* Â Two quick questions: 1) Any further C&C out there? (Looks directly at CJJ) Â 2) Is the Librarium "black-out" still in effect? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220906-ia-sky-sentinels/page/4/#findComment-2675803 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heru Posted March 2, 2011 Share Posted March 2, 2011 2) Is the Librarium "black-out" still in effect? Yes, until the B+C moves to new forum software. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220906-ia-sky-sentinels/page/4/#findComment-2675817 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marshal Renatus Posted March 2, 2011 Author Share Posted March 2, 2011 @ Heru: Thanks. :fakenopic: lol Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/220906-ia-sky-sentinels/page/4/#findComment-2675819 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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