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greysaint

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Hi all, first post...

 

Been toying with the idea of starting a new army. Reasonably happy with the colour scheme, and chapter symbol (see link) but wanted some thoughts on the name and the fluff.

 

My idea is they're an assault type chapter, bit like Raven Guard, lots of Jump packs and Thunderhawks (and Stormravens).

 

I was looking for a name, and had thought of Astral Knights, but then realised i knew the name from the rulebook, and on re-reading realised they existed... and were wiped out!

 

Then thought that maybe they could be a successor chapter... or somehow have used the Astral Knights' Geneseed, but maybe created (in secret?) to guard against future Necron Threats such as the World Engine (though i don't necessarily want them to be anti-Necron specialists!)

 

I know the Sable Swords were created after the Astral Knights were wiped out, but the fluff isn't that detailed - so maybe the Astral Swords were formed as well.

 

Any thoughts would be much appreciated!

 

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Then thought that maybe they could be a successor chapter... or somehow have used the Astral Knights' Geneseed, but maybe created (in secret?) to guard against future Necron Threats such as the World Engine (though i don't necessarily want them to be anti-Necron specialists!)

 

I know the Sable Swords were created after the Astral Knights were wiped out, but the fluff isn't that detailed - so maybe the Astral Swords were formed as well.

Something to consider: The aim of DIY Author is not exploit the blank places in the fluff, but explore. In the same way, the idea of DIY is not to clash with Universe, but to mesh with the Universe (thanks Apothete :lol: ).

 

That being said, is the connection with Astral Knights and the mystery (*shudder*) in the creation of your Chapter important part or not?

 

For example, the Astral Knights are the Chapter of unknown Founding, so there is possibility of your Chapter being founded from their gene-seed in the most recent 26th Founding (738.M41), without the need to exploit and clash.

Hey, thanks for the feedback. Definitely a good point about exploring rather than exploiting the canon. Will think on!

 

I suppose the link to the Astral Knights is an important factor to me. I think what was driving my idea was that I really liked the story of The Astral Knights and their heroic sacrifice, and I like the idea that my chapter could be a reborn version of them after they had been wiped out, perhaps created to combat the growing Necron threat, but i take the point about Necrons being recent.

 

Anyway, i'll keep thinking and post again when i have more ideas!

 

 

Wokkers, no test mini yet, but hopefully soon

  • 10 months later...
Why don't you just pick up and flesh out the Sable Swords? Since they were created from what was left of the Astral Knights.

Well...It said in the codex that only 700~ something marines fought the World Engine...what about the other two companies? :devil:

@greysaint: ...OH MY GOD.

I thought of the SAME thing reading the codex! Down to the very Chapter Icon-the sword w/ iron halo behind, like this:

http://www.bitzbox.co.uk/images/dark_angels_powerfist.jpg

As for my scheme, tho', it's a little different...like this:

spacemarine.jpg

Of the 6th Tactical Reserve

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