IA: Jade Emperors

[HarasinCreed]

So my basic idea for this army is that they will be very samouri centered. As for the actual background this is what i have thought up so far:

 

These are the remainder of the Second Legion(i know everyone hates the idea of using the second legion but well deal with it) the primarch(we will call him Jake untill i think of a good name) was blinded at birth and rased in the world by a Guild of samouri and through there teachings managed to work without eyesight instead opting to use a form of sonar because of his hightened senses it was rather effective. After reaching guildmaster status he attempted to unight all of the other Guilds and bring down the corrupt government that surrounded them. After fighting for 20 years the Government had killed off all but the strongest portions of the rebelion. KNowing that the corze was lost he called on someone to help him. And the Chaos god _____ responded granting him Demon Prince Hood in the form of a dragon and making his closest warriors practically unstopable. With this new found power Jake ravanged the opressors and set the world Zurmaro free. Shortly afterwards the Emperor of Mankind came to Zurmaro and delighted to have found a Primarch he happily accepted him and his chosen followers into the legion. Only after 1 year did Jake and his men start to show the seeds of Chaos. The emperor seing this tried to stop it but so far gone was Jake that it could not be stopped. Not wanting to destroy one of his own sons he exilled him to the plannet Zurmaro allong with every single one of the Jade Emperors and removed all record of ever finding them destroying all space ships leaving them marrooned for good.......or so he thought.

 

So i know it is kind of ruff but it is a start feedback appreciated.