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Chapter Organistion

It is said in the Codex Astartes that a Chapter must have 10 Companys, 5 being Battle Companies, 4 being Reserve Companies and 1 Scout Company.

- Strange, my copy of Codex talks about Veteran Company as well...

 

I thought 1st Company counted as a Battle company, but was made of veterans. Fixed anyways.

 

The Techmarines of the chapter are also trained here

- The Techmarines are trained on Mars.

 

Will change it.

 

Homeworld

In this system, there are only 4 worlds, 2 of which are habitable. In orbit around Garvus, the Forge World, there lies 3 moons, Hephaestus, Ares and Hades. On Hephaestus, the largest of the 3 moons, there is the Fortress Monastery of the Knights of the Inferno.

- *sigh* No. Read the Guide to DIYing.

 

A moon would be awesome to have as a fortress monastery... Oh well.

 

- Not this fallacy again... The Forge World is home of secretive and callous Adeptus Mechanicus and base of regiments of Skitarii and Titan Legion(s). The T'au are dead meat the moment they set their hoofs on the ground.

 

I didnt mean a forge world that makes titans, i meant a world full of Manufactorums that makes things, e.g ammo, or Guard weapons. (las etc) Would a Hiveworld better suit my meaning?

 

- The gift of equipment is a little bit questionable. It's task of Admech to give anything you need.

- The Battle Barge is incredibly powerful and rare ship in the Astartes arsenal. I don't think the Novamarines would give it to new Chapter.

- The list of equipment should be in sidebar since it's not very important.

 

Thought the Parent Chapter gave you some free stuff, will change.

 

so it was a sad day for the Knights of the Inferno when he disappeared around M41.140, near the system of Moracre.

- The date is wrong. M.42, but you are out of official time line.

 

Thought i changed that. Now M1.740.

2 Vanguard Veteran squads were given the glorius honour of founding the Knights, thanks to their actions in the Moracre Campaign.

- Why only Vanguard Vets? The Novamarines are rigid followers of Codex Astartes.

 

Should i change to something like: Several Vanguard and Sternguard Vets were given the honour to found and train... Blah blah.?

 

- Tau and Tyranids... Tau and Tyranids... Tau and Tyranids...

 

Damn xenos infesting my IA!!

 

Thanks for the advice. :D

A moon would be awesome to have as a fortress monastery... Oh well.

I don't think it's the moon bit that is the problem, but if you do have a moon as your fort.mon. then you need to say where they recruit from, because they can't from the moon (IMHO)

 

I didnt mean a forge world that makes titans, i meant a world full of Manufactorums that makes things, e.g ammo, or Guard weapons. (las etc) Would a Hiveworld better suit my meaning?

Typically Forgeworlds have Titan legions and Skitarri (SP?) to protect them, as they are kinda important.

 

Thought the Parent Chapter gave you some free stuff, will change.

To a certain extent, most of this tuff would be from the AdMech, you might just be able to stretch to some fancy armour from the Pregenitors.

 

Should i change to something like: Several Vanguard and Sternguard Vets were given the honour to found and train... Blah blah.?

Well, it wouldn't just be veterans, they would need chaplains and librarians and Techmarines. (IMHO) it's only really worth mentioning those that add something to the chapter, for example whoever became the first Chapter Master, because everybody (Should) know that the Pregenitor provides a training Cadre.

 

I hope NightRawenII doesn't mind :D

Homeworld

In this system, there are only 4 worlds, 2 of which are habitable. In orbit around Garvus, the Forge World, there lies 3 moons, Hephaestus, Ares and Hades. On Hephaestus, the largest of the 3 moons, there is the Fortress Monastery of the Knights of the Inferno.

- *sigh* No. Read the Guide to DIYing.

 

A moon would be awesome to have as a fortress monastery... Oh well.

Did you read the guide? ;) The moon is not problem, the moon orbiting stronghold of Adeptus Mechanicus is...

 

- Not this fallacy again... The Forge World is home of secretive and callous Adeptus Mechanicus and base of regiments of Skitarii and Titan Legion(s). The T'au are dead meat the moment they set their hoofs on the ground.

 

I didnt mean a forge world that makes titans, i meant a world full of Manufactorums that makes things, e.g ammo, or Guard weapons. (las etc) Would a Hiveworld better suit my meaning?

... or Industrial World.

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