Uprising Posted June 28, 2011 Author Share Posted June 28, 2011 To be honest, i serious thought everyone would hate the new chapter formantion idea then my previous one but i guess i can be proven wrong. :P I now plan on editting the draft and having it becoming a permit part of the IA. I will hopefully fix all the question raised by Bjorn and Nightrawen tomorrow aswell but it`s time for bed. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/229290-the-carnivores/page/2/#findComment-2804783 Share on other sites More sharing options...
legoss Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 Uprising, I really like where you are going with your IA. I say it's a fantastic idea, but to be fair, I considered a similar idea for my own DIY for a few years. I was never brave enough to put idea to liber though, kept telling myself it was too silly. So I'm glad that you did this, and congratulations on a truly original execution of a very cool idea. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/229290-the-carnivores/page/2/#findComment-2806105 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uprising Posted July 2, 2011 Author Share Posted July 2, 2011 Uprising, I really like where you are going with your IA. I say it's a fantastic idea, but to be fair, I considered a similar idea for my own DIY for a few years. I was never brave enough to put idea to liber though, kept telling myself it was too silly. So I'm glad that you did this, and congratulations on a truly original execution of a very cool idea. After countless hours writing, editting, rewriting and receiving critication, it made me question myself on why I just didn`t choose a prewitten chapter like salamander or carcharadons. You sir(or Miss) had made my day and remind me why I started this IA. Thank you. For everyone else, I add the draft with some improvement to my IA. If their any issue let me know before i start on the other section, so I may fix them. As always thanks for reading and your advice and opinion. Good Night. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/229290-the-carnivores/page/2/#findComment-2808567 Share on other sites More sharing options...
skamp Posted July 4, 2011 Share Posted July 4, 2011 Arent they supposed to be salamander sucessors and called the tyrant claws? ^_^ Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/229290-the-carnivores/page/2/#findComment-2809889 Share on other sites More sharing options...
legoss Posted July 6, 2011 Share Posted July 6, 2011 Uprising I am a sir, and just reread the IA post again, good job. Not counting the grammar errors, you've found a unique take on your chapter, very bloodthirsty but kind of tragic heroes. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/229290-the-carnivores/page/2/#findComment-2811525 Share on other sites More sharing options...
legoss Posted July 14, 2011 Share Posted July 14, 2011 Uprising, anything new for the carnivores? I'd love to see more of these guys. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/229290-the-carnivores/page/2/#findComment-2819135 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uprising Posted July 15, 2011 Author Share Posted July 15, 2011 Uprising, anything new for the carnivores? I'd love to see more of these guys. I have a follower? :) This is different. Back on topic, i have lately been extremely busy with school work, work, repairing and life in general. Even with this load, I have been working on them a little. I'm not a fan of teasers but I`m currently working on the carnivore after they repair and rebuild, some heros of the chapter. Also two battles in the chapter early history: one based on the second predator movie and the other is based off of the book, The Lost World by Conan Doyle. I hope to have this all up on sunday but I can't promise anything. Skamp: I believe you are mistaking me for someone else. I did a search and the creator of the Tyrants Claws is a much better writer then me. Legoss: Thanks for enjoying the IA so far. I'm glad you think their tragic heros, that what i was going for. Could you show me some grammer errors, I'm terrible with grammer. ;) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/229290-the-carnivores/page/2/#findComment-2819702 Share on other sites More sharing options...
skamp Posted July 16, 2011 Share Posted July 16, 2011 Uprising, anything new for the carnivores? I'd love to see more of these guys. I have a follower? :P This is different. Back on topic, i have lately been extremely busy with school work, work, repairing and life in general. Even with this load, I have been working on them a little. I'm not a fan of teasers but I`m currently working on the carnivore after they repair and rebuild, some heros of the chapter. Also two battles in the chapter early history: one based on the second predator movie and the other is based off of the book, The Lost World by Conan Doyle. I hope to have this all up on sunday but I can't promise anything. Skamp: I believe you are mistaking me for someone else. I did a search and the creator of the Tyrants Claws is a much better writer then me. Legoss: Thanks for enjoying the IA so far. I'm glad you think their tragic heros, that what i was going for. Could you show me some grammer errors, I'm terrible with grammer. :P ;) dammit tyrant claws were cool.......Yours is really good too though id like to see more ^_^ Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/229290-the-carnivores/page/2/#findComment-2820258 Share on other sites More sharing options...
legoss Posted July 17, 2011 Share Posted July 17, 2011 Uprising, I'm not too sure about specifics with the grammar, mine is usually really bad. But it just flows oddly, kind of puts me in mind of reading Russian lol Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/229290-the-carnivores/page/2/#findComment-2821259 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nexus25 Posted September 5, 2011 Share Posted September 5, 2011 So far as recruitment goes how about this: The Carnivores take the best of the young hunters and make them fight terrifying predators to prove they are worthy to be Space Marines the Apex Predator and true warriors. If they fail their bodies are returned to their tribes to be honored for their ability to even be chosen and to have died fighting the best and most dangerous creatures their would could throw at them. Edit: I remembered when we talked stating something the Carnivors taking a tithe or just taking the best young warriors from villiages to run recruitment hunts. Edit 2: Recruitment option change 2 instead of hunting the planets predators have them hunt the current scouts of the chapter if they can wound one and stay alive for a week they are in if not their bodies are returned to their village as honored dead to be honored by their people. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/229290-the-carnivores/page/2/#findComment-2867688 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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