CKO Posted May 11, 2011 Share Posted May 11, 2011 I am back still working on the same DIY chapter but this time I have had a change of heart. The chapter I am trying to make is completely different from my previous ones and I would like to get started and I have some questions. The Undaunted Guardians are a Blood Angel succesor chapter, their unique quality is that they take the strive for perfection theme that the Blood Angels have to another level. Everything is an art to them from close quarters combat and aiming a bolter to posture and communication skills. With that being said how do I differentiate the chapter more from other chapters? Its hard to make striving for perfection a unique quaility when every chapter strives for perfection. I guess if I dumb it down a little I want to make a good version of Emperor's Children. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/229529-undaunted-guardians/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Olis Posted May 11, 2011 Share Posted May 11, 2011 Hmm. Well, with the BA what traits can you exaggerate? Bloodthirstiness, perfectionism, self control (usually until the Rage kicks in), that maudlin remorse about Sanguinius that shows once in blue moon... Basically you've picked a trait that is THE hardest to take to another level, and the kicker is others have been there before. You've said it yourself - the Emperor's Children. I'd honestly suggest working on a different trait but that's only advice. If you want to stick with it, fair enough. :) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/229529-undaunted-guardians/#findComment-2754261 Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightrawenII Posted May 11, 2011 Share Posted May 11, 2011 Its hard to make striving for perfection a unique quaility when every chapter strives for perfection. No every Chapter strives for the same kind of perfection. The Imperial Fists perfection is different from Ultramarines perfection and Mortifactors perfection and so forth ad nauseam... You have to find a *different* perfection. :lol: I guess if I dumb it down a little I want to make a good version of Emperor's Children. The problem with ECh perfection is that you are staring into maws of Mary Sue right from the start. :P BTW, why Blood Angels geneseed? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/229529-undaunted-guardians/#findComment-2754271 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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