mozenrath Posted June 12, 2011 Share Posted June 12, 2011 Well, I've finished my dreadnought 2 weeks ago, but i couldn't take photos, but a friend of mine yes. Is the first time I try to make battle damages, and well, I need critics and opinions to improve!!! http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-PWL2zZjO6wI/TfSkNdGRRmI/AAAAAAAAAk4/jCw826B0tZc/s1600/ED3.jpg http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-ndT6QZ9KR0Y/TfSkM-a7jlI/AAAAAAAAAkw/64YP3Q4mlqU/s1600/ED2.jpg http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-4UYmLgAgeAc/TfSkMhPzbxI/AAAAAAAAAko/P79I2uOkIVc/s1600/ED1.jpg http://4.bp.blogspot.com/-unNCmjWx04g/TfSkNoDHuZI/AAAAAAAAAlA/LzHcrvxiG6Q/s1600/ED4.jpg http://2.bp.blogspot.com/-VBcOrvl469w/TfSkBFjTftI/AAAAAAAAAkg/hJcn7wCuSkY/s1600/ED5.jpg There are so many photos in my blog, if you want to see them, you can do HERE C&C apreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kassill Posted June 12, 2011 Share Posted June 12, 2011 I like him! And the battledamage doesnt look bad at all imo! Very well done! Is that a tree on his right chest area? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mozenrath Posted June 12, 2011 Author Share Posted June 12, 2011 Yeah, Ygdrassil, from norse mythology. Thanks guy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Codicier Lucion Posted June 12, 2011 Share Posted June 12, 2011 Very nice, I like the visible metal where his paintwork has been broken off. Also nice inclusion of the striped markings on his assault cannon. Mind if I ask what you did to make the tree image on the left of the body? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mozenrath Posted June 12, 2011 Author Share Posted June 12, 2011 Well, first, fortress grey in all the zone. Then, whit a mix of black and grey, draw what you want, then whit a different tone of grey some strips, then, gryphone sepia washes until the tone are the desired. The stripes with other tones are for look a bit ancient. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolffan Posted June 12, 2011 Share Posted June 12, 2011 Im not sure, that Egil was Dreadnought, but still, this is awesomely cool, dude=p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother_Fatiswon Posted June 12, 2011 Share Posted June 12, 2011 looks like you use a hair of green stuff on your assault cannon barrel to seal that gap... but otherwise i love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mozenrath Posted June 12, 2011 Author Share Posted June 12, 2011 Im not sure, that Egil was Dreadnought, but still, this is awesomely cool, dude=p No, Egil_Ironwolf is my nick in a Spanish Forum called Warhammer Aqui hahahahaha. Well, the green stuff, I buyed it after paint it and now i'm experimenting with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marshall_Brant Posted June 13, 2011 Share Posted June 13, 2011 Looks good. The BD (battle damage) isn't bad, quite good. My thing is that the caution stripes could use some highlights and maybe some cleaning up too. What I mean is it looks like some of the yellow is getting into the black areas and that the black could use another coat or two. 2 cents. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mozenrath Posted June 13, 2011 Author Share Posted June 13, 2011 My english is limited, but if It's what I think, the black into the yellow is not black, is greey+black, because the battle damage is did with the army carrier foam . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marshall_Brant Posted June 13, 2011 Share Posted June 13, 2011 My english is limited, but if It's what I think, the black into the yellow is not black, is greey+black, because the battle damage is did with the army carrier foam . It's my fault. What I meant is the black stripes and the yellow stripes. To me it looks like the yellow stripes are bleeding into the black stripes and the black stripes themselves don't seem that dark. Does that help to clarify? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mozenrath Posted June 13, 2011 Author Share Posted June 13, 2011 My english is limited, but if It's what I think, the black into the yellow is not black, is greey+black, because the battle damage is did with the army carrier foam . It's my fault. What I meant is the black stripes and the yellow stripes. To me it looks like the yellow stripes are bleeding into the black stripes and the black stripes themselves don't seem that dark. Does that help to clarify? Yeah Yeah, the edges more defined, no? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Marshall_Brant Posted June 13, 2011 Share Posted June 13, 2011 My english is limited, but if It's what I think, the black into the yellow is not black, is greey+black, because the battle damage is did with the army carrier foam . It's my fault. What I meant is the black stripes and the yellow stripes. To me it looks like the yellow stripes are bleeding into the black stripes and the black stripes themselves don't seem that dark. Does that help to clarify? Yeah Yeah, the edges more defined, no? Exactly. The edges of the stripes could use a bit more definition/clarity. You could highlight the black and yellow stripes to make them pop out more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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