Malivon Posted June 27, 2011 Share Posted June 27, 2011 This is the start of my personal space marine chapter. Lemme know what you guys think of them. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/233085-shadow-swords-space-marines/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Cambrius Posted June 27, 2011 Share Posted June 27, 2011 I like a lot! Great freehanding on the symbol, I don't think I could make a sword like that on a shoulderpad unless I'd been literally injected with a dose of long patience. :) Do you have any background material on them? The bases look like they haven't been painted though. :D Cambrius Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/233085-shadow-swords-space-marines/#findComment-2804677 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malivon Posted June 27, 2011 Author Share Posted June 27, 2011 Yes I am writing fluff on them as we speak. I just posted some of the first chapter of it that I have been writing on the short stories page. Also I am working on a mini for the main protagonist aswell. So ssome time this week I will have a face to go with the main Character. http://www.bolterandchainsword.com/index.p...howtopic=233086 , this is a link to the story. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/233085-shadow-swords-space-marines/#findComment-2804685 Share on other sites More sharing options...
facmanpob Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 I like them a lot! :) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/233085-shadow-swords-space-marines/#findComment-2804948 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Severian Posted June 28, 2011 Share Posted June 28, 2011 The freehand designs on the shoulderpads look nice. The armor itself looks good but could use a bit of work with some more detail on the chest plates etc. Also need some cleaning of mold lines that you missed fella. I know how easy it is to miss one and the pain it is to correct but there you have it, my (hopefully) constructive criticism. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/233085-shadow-swords-space-marines/#findComment-2804965 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Beef Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 very nice, just paint or ink the sand on the bases and you are done. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/233085-shadow-swords-space-marines/#findComment-2805943 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Octavulg Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 Very pretty. :( Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/233085-shadow-swords-space-marines/#findComment-2806121 Share on other sites More sharing options...
thade Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 very nice, just paint or ink the sand on the bases and you are done. I concur. Those paint jobs look amazing; I'd definitely darken up the bases just a bit to "fit the mood" as it were. I understand you may have been going for contrast, but maybe make that look like "night-time dirt" then. :( And flock! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/233085-shadow-swords-space-marines/#findComment-2806147 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Olgerth Istaarn Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 Bare metal looks awesome when properly done. And that right there is properly done. Great looking army. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/233085-shadow-swords-space-marines/#findComment-2806177 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drax40K Posted June 29, 2011 Share Posted June 29, 2011 Excellent job! I like the color scheme and the chapter symbol is very well done! I do believe that when it comes to Space Marine color schemes less is more. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/233085-shadow-swords-space-marines/#findComment-2806204 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malivon Posted June 30, 2011 Author Share Posted June 30, 2011 Thanks I will see what I can do with the bases. I will also try to work some seals into some of the marines. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/233085-shadow-swords-space-marines/#findComment-2806833 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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