Ufthak Posted October 21, 2011 Share Posted October 21, 2011 Brilliant! :) Really great, keep up the good work, this is too good a story to not finish! ;) Your style of writing is very good, though there are a few mistakes here and there. It's easy to read and great fun! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/236617-betrayals-between-brothers/page/2/#findComment-2906061 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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