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Sgt.Rob

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Hius head looks a little low with respect to his shoulders. Where is his backpack? And he's a pretty handsome looking space wolf. Looks more like an ultramarine that grew out his hair, lol. But the art is awesome bro. Very nice. Love it. Little grey night action on his bolt pistol there.
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Looks good! Hope you don't mind, here are some thing that you could do to make it even better. :)

 

1. Draw through your object, especially along the shoulder pads. These are usually the hardest to get right, but when you draw through, you can see the curve of the pad better. The curve of the pad shows how large it can be.

2. Line up the pads. Currently they are of different sizes

3. Up the detail for the gold. Currently it just looks like the shoulderpad yellow. Gold is reflective, so it needs to reflect light and shade.

4. Even out the details, contrast and shade. This will work with the light source.

5. Desaturate some of the tones. Currently they are all very intense and thus fighting for attention.

6. Push some stuff into the background by desaturating/lightening it.

7. Even out the size of the chest.

8. making the head smaller can help make the physique more impressive.

 

http://www.scuzworks.com/misc/SWedit.jpg

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