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basically i just want to know whether there is anything i should add or avoid on the next guy.

Avoid the mould lines on your plasma pistols! :cuss

 

When you come to paint text on your scrolls, be sure you're thinning the paint enough - it doesn't quite look like you are (although it isn't hideous or anything, not saying you should stop doing it) Speaking of which, what kind of brush are you using for the text?

 

Don't worry about the lack of eyes, leaving them shaded is often the best choice unless you're really good at them. Might want a few more highlights on the face, though - it's the part of a mini that draws the eye first, and should almost always be the part you put most work into.

 

Finally, the blood drops on the shoulder pad are a little patchy - give them another thin coat of the red you're using (blood red?) and they'll look a lot better.

 

You're off to a promising start, keep it up!

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