Phoenix Lord Posted September 13, 2011 Share Posted September 13, 2011 After deciding on a name for my Custom Chapter I thought I would put down some basic ideas for the Chapter and see what you guys and gals think. Origins - 7th Founding, Late 32nd Millennium - Night Hawk successor. Homeworld - Original world was destroyed after the vast nuclear power station malfunctioned. - Population that were saved were relocated to a new world by the chapter. Combat Doctrine - Rapid Assault, Mechanised Assault - Preference for Jump Packs, Plasma Weaponry Organisation - 10 Companies - 1>5 Companies 2 Vet Sqds, 4 Tact Sqds, 2 Ass Sqds and 2 Dev Sqds - 6->10 Companies 4 Tact Sqds, 2 Ass Sqds, 2 Dev Sqds and 2 Scout Sqds - Organisation changed whilst the chapter was fleet based to prevent the loss of veterans and scouts if a vessel was lost in the warp or during void warfare. Beliefs - Resurrection - Corax the Deliverer best primarch - Emperor pinnacle of mankind evolution - Humanitarianen Geneseed - Raven Guard Geneseed - No further mutation of the geneseed Main thing im not entirely sure on <_< is the homeworld section as is it possible for a world to be destroyed via a large scale explosion. Comments and Critique Please and :cuss Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238337-phoenix-warriors/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightrawenII Posted September 13, 2011 Share Posted September 13, 2011 Hello, just briefly... Origins - 7th Founding, Late 32nd Millennium - Night Hawk successor. - I'm not sure if this is wise, since I can't find any info, when the Night Hawks were founded or what gene-line they are. - Preference for Jump Packs, Plasma Weaponry - Plasma weaponry is rare and dangerous piece of equipment. - Organisation changed whilst the chapter was fleet based to prevent the loss of veterans and scouts if a vessel was lost in the warp or during void warfare. - Well, both Veteran and Scout company rarely fight as single formation, in most cases the detachment is send to bolster the Battle Co's. In fact, the Battle Co's are the only companies, who fight as one formation. Main thing im not entirely sure on, is the homeworld section as is it possible for a world to be destroyed via a large scale explosion. - Well, if the nuke was very strong, it could cause a nuclear winter. Cheers, NightrawenII. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238337-phoenix-warriors/#findComment-2874657 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrashMan Posted September 15, 2011 Share Posted September 15, 2011 Oo...we now have Phoenix Lords, Phoenix Knights AND Phoenix Warriors! :) Welcome to the Brotherhood of the Eternal Fire brother! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238337-phoenix-warriors/#findComment-2876213 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Lord Posted September 15, 2011 Author Share Posted September 15, 2011 NightrawenII. Thanks for your comments, taken that info and turning it into a basic IA TrashMan Thanks for welcome to the Brotherhood of Eternal Flame. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238337-phoenix-warriors/#findComment-2876688 Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrashMan Posted September 16, 2011 Share Posted September 16, 2011 Hmm...I'd change the nuclear plant mishap to something else..Something that would warrant evacuation of the world. A rampaging virus? Corruption? Exterminatus? OR possibly a special plant at a fault line is sabotaged/blos up...causing all kind of tectonic chaos. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238337-phoenix-warriors/#findComment-2877021 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarKHaZZ13 Posted September 16, 2011 Share Posted September 16, 2011 Ahhh! Phoenix Warriors was the name of my chapter before I decided to ditch the DiY in favour for the Crimson Fists and Salamanders :P +Edit+ I'll see if I can dig out any old art work/designs you can use if you like. I have no need for them like Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238337-phoenix-warriors/#findComment-2877143 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Lord Posted September 17, 2011 Author Share Posted September 17, 2011 Trashman The nuclear power station was gonna kick off a chain of tectonic devastation that increases in magnitude destabilising the planet and so forth DarKHaZZ13 I would highly appreciate any further inspiration as this all started cos of the High Elf phoenix banner Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/238337-phoenix-warriors/#findComment-2878247 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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