Small Far Away Posted October 22, 2011 Author Share Posted October 22, 2011 Have re-jigged the article to make it seem more like an IA article. Am now thinking about Sternguard squads being related to the chaplains, who run the meditations. Still not sure yet. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240088-sliver-sharks/page/2/#findComment-2906361 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CKO Posted October 23, 2011 Share Posted October 23, 2011 It looks good, the only question I have is that if they are unified why are there Companies. Wouldnt there just be one chapter lead by the chapter master? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240088-sliver-sharks/page/2/#findComment-2906794 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Small Far Away Posted October 23, 2011 Author Share Posted October 23, 2011 A combination of tradition, convention, and the fact that whilst the main fleet travel together, companies are often sent off to do stuff on their own. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240088-sliver-sharks/page/2/#findComment-2906800 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CKO Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 Ok that is fine but you need to add it to your IA, dont need to have to explain yourself. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240088-sliver-sharks/page/2/#findComment-2908196 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Small Far Away Posted October 25, 2011 Author Share Posted October 25, 2011 Oh yeah, good point. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240088-sliver-sharks/page/2/#findComment-2908257 Share on other sites More sharing options...
legoss Posted October 25, 2011 Share Posted October 25, 2011 While the bulk of the chapter waits nearby, do they respond with maximum force if their advance elements need help or do they send small chunks? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240088-sliver-sharks/page/2/#findComment-2908389 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Small Far Away Posted November 21, 2011 Author Share Posted November 21, 2011 NEw update to the chapter. No major modifications, just a few more additions to give them more detail. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240088-sliver-sharks/page/2/#findComment-2928487 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leofric Posted November 22, 2011 Share Posted November 22, 2011 Just want to check whether this chapter is called the Sliver* or Silver Sharks as you use both terms in the IA, the two words meaning different things *Sliver- a small slice off a larger item eg. a sliver of cake - Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240088-sliver-sharks/page/2/#findComment-2928669 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Small Far Away Posted November 22, 2011 Author Share Posted November 22, 2011 Oops. I am afraid I may have made a typo. A pretty drastic typo at that. I'll deal with it, and put an update up tormorrow. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/240088-sliver-sharks/page/2/#findComment-2928816 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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