ChaosKen60 Posted October 29, 2011 Share Posted October 29, 2011 Ok I have been working on my DIY Blood Angels Successor Chapter --- Eternity's Angels. Sorry it took so long but R/L got in the way also I hope you all will give a little feed back. I Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/241105-eternitys-angels/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
CKO Posted October 30, 2011 Share Posted October 30, 2011 I am having a hard time reading it could you please re-arrange it. (sorry I need sentences and paragraphs ;) ) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/241105-eternitys-angels/#findComment-2912142 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosKen60 Posted October 30, 2011 Author Share Posted October 30, 2011 I am having a hard time reading it could you please re-arrange it. (sorry I need sentences and paragraphs :rolleyes: ) Sorry about that -- Fixed Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/241105-eternitys-angels/#findComment-2912226 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CKO Posted October 30, 2011 Share Posted October 30, 2011 Why are you writing it as if someone is telling a tale? It is not a bad thing I just want to know so that my comments dont intefere with what you plan on doing later on. We dont get much information from what you have given us, perhaps the dreadnaught can mention the first battle and give us some info on why they were created. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/241105-eternitys-angels/#findComment-2912233 Share on other sites More sharing options...
ChaosKen60 Posted November 9, 2011 Author Share Posted November 9, 2011 Why are you writing it as if someone is telling a tale? It is not a bad thing I just want to know so that my comments dont intefere with what you plan on doing later on. We dont get much information from what you have given us, perhaps the dreadnaught can mention the first battle and give us some info on why they were created. I hope with the updated/edited post it will answer some of your questions, I did try too. :o Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/241105-eternitys-angels/#findComment-2920049 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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