empchildrenbob Posted November 13, 2011 Share Posted November 13, 2011 http://theunholyharbinger.blogspot.com/201...pha-legion.html I want some honest feedback so i can get better. I think its a good start. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/241916-alpharius-primarch-of-the-alpha-legion/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
G3rman Posted November 13, 2011 Share Posted November 13, 2011 Not sure about your chest piece, it seems too big and not shaped correctly; it also dwarfs the shoulder pads which look too small in comparison. Also, go back to the eyes, can't tell from the pictures but you might want to improve on them a bit. Otherwise its a nice conversion, love AL. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/241916-alpharius-primarch-of-the-alpha-legion/#findComment-2923209 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grimdarkness Posted November 14, 2011 Share Posted November 14, 2011 Pleas swap out that head it just looks deformed. Other then that it,s a good start. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/241916-alpharius-primarch-of-the-alpha-legion/#findComment-2923293 Share on other sites More sharing options...
NightGount Posted November 19, 2011 Share Posted November 19, 2011 Not at all bad for first sculpting. Head may use some rtouches, though. Also: why bald???? I hate baldies.... Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/241916-alpharius-primarch-of-the-alpha-legion/#findComment-2927051 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DV8 Posted November 19, 2011 Share Posted November 19, 2011 Besides the technical flaws, my only issue with this is that it's a blatant copy of an already existing scratch-build of Alpharius by James Craig: Primarch Alpharius by James Craig Now I grant you, copying or mimicking another person's model really isn't a problem. They do say, afterall, that mimicry is the sincerest form of flattery. But you should at least cite your reference(s). DV8 Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/241916-alpharius-primarch-of-the-alpha-legion/#findComment-2927111 Share on other sites More sharing options...
empchildrenbob Posted November 20, 2011 Author Share Posted November 20, 2011 If you read my post on my blog before this, I talk about how I copied James Craigs alpharius along with a picture of his model and my w.I.p Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/241916-alpharius-primarch-of-the-alpha-legion/#findComment-2927464 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blckbuster Posted November 21, 2011 Share Posted November 21, 2011 I can't even say I'm a fan of the original, you probably have great potential Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/241916-alpharius-primarch-of-the-alpha-legion/#findComment-2928333 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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