IA: Astral Swords

[SaltyOps]

In response to Andrew J, I went ahead and addressed the issues you raised. I hope that it makes a little more sense now. :tu:

 

In response to Canton, I have addressed some of the issues that you raised including the Tyranid parallel. In truth I simply forgot to delete this sentence as my feelings were similar to yours on the subject. In regards to the Strategic Prognostication of the Chapter, I felt that it would be interesting to have the threat that they were created to combat be an unknown. I like the feeling of uncertainty that this creates around the Chapter. I also went ahead and injected a little more personality into the Chapter in the form of their calm and calculated nature. I expounded on their Stealth tactics a little more and the reason for their use of such tactics. In response to their Inquisitorial alignment I had simply not gotten to writing that portion yet. As a matter of fact quite a few of your points were simply things that had yet to be addressed through my creation process. I hope that that addresses some of your concerns. :D

 

And as always thank you everyone for helping me along.