Brother Immolator Posted January 23, 2012 Share Posted January 23, 2012 Is Gregorius the same one from your previous story or are they related only in name? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/245436-what-do-yall-think-the-fallen/page/3/#findComment-2974639 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vazzy Posted January 23, 2012 Author Share Posted January 23, 2012 Is Gregorius the same one from your previous story or are they related only in name? Yeah its the same character. That's why I did it. Also, I'm updating Sons of the Lion tonight. We'll finally see Gregorious in action. Here are his IRL stats S 10 T6 WS 8 W4 I6 A 5 Eternal Warrior artificer relic blade FNP Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/245436-what-do-yall-think-the-fallen/page/3/#findComment-2974873 Share on other sites More sharing options...
WatchCaptainAzrael Posted January 23, 2012 Share Posted January 23, 2012 Movie Marine then. :D Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/245436-what-do-yall-think-the-fallen/page/3/#findComment-2974892 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vazzy Posted January 23, 2012 Author Share Posted January 23, 2012 Movie Marine then. :D It's funny you say that...cus its true. But my gaming group has a leveling system that requires you to take on anggrath or skulltaker in 1v1 combat. And believe me you need all the help you can get. He's taken on two trygons and won Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/245436-what-do-yall-think-the-fallen/page/3/#findComment-2974914 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vazzy Posted January 24, 2012 Author Share Posted January 24, 2012 Part 3 Hooray!!!! I'm really rolling Peliel had walked for hours now, the featureless landscape, blurred. After walking more than 10 miles, Peliel had finally found a road. It was a long beaten path, pounded into the ground by years of travel. At this point, night had fallen, and in the distance, Peliel could make out faint glimmers of light. He increased his pace to a run, and within minutes he arrived at the town. There were few buildings, a hotel, a Saloon, and a abandoned building with the word Sheriff in faint weathered letters. Peliel popped the seal on his hem, a breeze, of cool fresh air, something he had never experienced in his 25 years, wafted across his pale face. He smiled, his dark eyes glinting in the failing light, and began to walk towards the Saloon. He clipped the helmet to his belt and scraped past the narrow opening into the bar. Upon his entry, the room fell silent. All eyes turned towards Peliel, as his armored form marched across the room. The iron barstool protested as he settled upon it, and called for the bartender. "Bartender." he murmured, " I would appreciate a water." The small wiry man blinked, confused. "Uh, a, a water?" he questioned. Peliel nodded. "Yes, a water." The bartender burst into laughter, and most of the bar exploded with him. A water! You want to die son? A water.Terra protect us" The man slid him a glass with an amber colored liquid. "What is this," Peliel growled angrily, not used to being spoken to in such a tone, and taken aback by his statement. 'Amasec," the man smiled, "Guaranteed to knock you on yer ass!" "I very much doubt that." Peliel smirked and downed the drink in one with one gulp. The crowd turned away once they realized nothing comedic would occur, disappointed. He gestured to the bartender,"What can you tell me about this place?" The man snorted, "Throne, you don't know much for a Space Marine. I'd love to help, but I've got a bar to run. If you want information, i reccomend you talk to her, and pointed to young woman and what appeared to be her son seated near the door. Peliel nodded his thanks and headed towards the table, intent on finding where in the galxy he was. What did y'all think? Hs everyone enjoyed it. C&C guys. :D Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/245436-what-do-yall-think-the-fallen/page/3/#findComment-2975295 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tengo Posted January 24, 2012 Share Posted January 24, 2012 I'm starting to get pretty into the story, I think it's good, although there are one or two spelling and grammar mistake that I couldn't help noticing. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/245436-what-do-yall-think-the-fallen/page/3/#findComment-2975681 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Immolator Posted January 24, 2012 Share Posted January 24, 2012 I would appreciate a water."The small wiry man blinked, confused. "Uh, a, a water?" he questioned. Peliel nodded. Make that :I would appreciate a keg/bottle/glass/whatever...of water.Or some water. And delete the two a's after the a. The rest is too interesting not to read. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/245436-what-do-yall-think-the-fallen/page/3/#findComment-2975688 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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