dave663 Posted January 27, 2012 Share Posted January 27, 2012 hi guys. id like to show you my new table! tell me what can i do better, what you like and what sucks. thanks for constructive criticism. http://img607.imageshack.us/img607/7789/56833310.jpg http://img29.imageshack.us/img29/811/13448271.jpg http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/6748/69364273.jpg http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/5070/67347024.jpg http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/7484/91373127.jpg http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/6938/89833353.jpg http://img802.imageshack.us/img802/5544/36425679.jpg http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/3379/71070309.jpg http://img836.imageshack.us/img836/2190/84560298.jpg http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/251/18477992.jpg http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/237/17756783.jpg http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/5867/28798843.jpg http://img88.imageshack.us/img88/6291/w2aa.jpg http://img821.imageshack.us/img821/3963/58104135.jpg http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/9307/32329875.jpg http://img256.imageshack.us/img256/1117/65015620.jpg http://img708.imageshack.us/img708/5774/67513858.jpg http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/5527/73832338.jpg http://img96.imageshack.us/img96/3118/39745740.jpg http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/6374/42893437.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lysandestolpe Posted January 28, 2012 Share Posted January 28, 2012 This looks reaaaaaally good! Only thing I would say is some solid line of sight block.. after that you've got yourself a solid gaming table mate! Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
teku Posted January 28, 2012 Share Posted January 28, 2012 nice work on the terrain! can't give any comments except its pretty damn good looking! nice and simple! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeffy.Gee Posted January 28, 2012 Share Posted January 28, 2012 I'd agree with Lysandestople that you need some terrain to block line of sight but this is pretty cool otherwise. Maybe some bastions or the chaos ruins? JG Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Nezulius Posted January 28, 2012 Share Posted January 28, 2012 Looks like a very good gaming table! If I would really need to make any comment...it would be on the sharpness of the lines of the flock patches. If that makes any sence... Perhaps you could try to make the grass gradually go thinner on the edges to have a more natural effect. But anyway, still it looks like a nice table to play on. Have lots of fun with it! :to: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cypher441 Posted January 29, 2012 Share Posted January 29, 2012 If I would really need to make any comment...it would be on the sharpness of the lines of the flock patches. If that makes any sence... Perhaps you could try to make the grass gradually go thinner on the edges to have a more natural effect. This. The grass does unfortunately just look artificially patched. Try fading it out, roughing up the edges, and also using different colours of flock to simulate dead/dying grass. If the rest of the board is just bare earth and dirt brown, then the grass should look a lot less healthy. It's a case of less is more. My only other suggestion would be the pebbles you have used around the craters, and on top of some of the hills. They are too smooth and rounded, which messes with the effect of scale when the pebbles are supposed to represent big rocks and boulders. Try giving them some texture, deeper shadows, and a light dusting of a drybrush highlight to really emphasize a rough, jagged surface. Apart from those two things, it's a good table, and you should have many-a happy game on it!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
plasman Posted January 30, 2012 Share Posted January 30, 2012 Great stuff :D , but I agree with Cypher 441 regarding the grass, it looks a bit artificial (it's supposed to be a W40K battlefield not a golf course). Just a suggestion: may be you could use Citadel's grass tufts to add some variety to your grass. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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