Stanfar Posted March 30, 2012 Author Share Posted March 30, 2012 Did a quick read over before I have to do something else. I will be back for more, but I do have this to say: So far, this is much better. Like I said, more critique to come, along with some possible suggestions? Sounds good to me Battle-brother. The fluff continues today evening when i have time, but it will continue. Yes i have to agree that this fluff starts to sound even better than the last one and also i'm happy if you have some ideas to make it even better. ^^ Critique is also welcome of course. = D Stanfar out. = ) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/248964-death-legion/page/2/#findComment-3028226 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stanfar Posted March 31, 2012 Author Share Posted March 31, 2012 Okay so i think that the Origins would be ready, but perhaps i will put little more details if it is needed + fix some errors or something... :) Anyhow i thought that i will write about their home world or if you have something what i should write before that, then please let me know. ^^ Ouh... and the colouring should be added shortly there also. Thanks and Stanfar out. 'May the Emperor light your day.' Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/248964-death-legion/page/2/#findComment-3029098 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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