Alys Dwr Posted May 2, 2012 Share Posted May 2, 2012 Well, better get started, that chapter is not going to write itself. I hope my english will suffice :cuss This is going to be great :cuss If you're worried about your english i'll gladly proof read and lend a hand where possible. Same offer goes out to anybody really, just PM me first so we can arrange something and make sure i don't get bombarded with too many :) Al Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3052356 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Darkover Posted May 2, 2012 Share Posted May 2, 2012 This gives me an excuse to get the Time Lords to something other than a name! Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3052365 Share on other sites More sharing options...
WatchCaptainAzrael Posted May 2, 2012 Share Posted May 2, 2012 I might as well use this as motivation for my "Bastard Swords".. Beginning with giving them a proper name. xD Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3052369 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother Darkover Posted May 2, 2012 Share Posted May 2, 2012 Thats a fine name for any Chapter! Especially since you can then go in so many directions, although designing them like the Star Shanks would be hilarious Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3052387 Share on other sites More sharing options...
WatchCaptainAzrael Posted May 2, 2012 Share Posted May 2, 2012 They're not bastards as in the sword, they're bastards because of lineage uncertainties. :) Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3052416 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bringer of Redemption Posted May 2, 2012 Share Posted May 2, 2012 This is what happens when I stop visiting the forum for a couple of months... All the fun stuff happens. Right before exams, too. Oh well, I'm in. Time to get writing. --BoR Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3052511 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand Master Belial Posted May 2, 2012 Author Share Posted May 2, 2012 You are welcome to join! You have to enter into an Unforgiven state of mind though... :lol: Are the Angels of Vigilance still up for grabs? Or am I getting the whole thing wrong? Ludovic Preference is for New Chapters but the Angels of Vigilance could get some more love. Be wary of the Retcon though from GW. They are a bit more established. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3052550 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Isiah Posted May 2, 2012 Share Posted May 2, 2012 Just want to say good look to you all and looking forwards to seeing some awesome sauce DA Successors. I fully intend to get my very secretive Successors the **** ******* out into the open at last. Cheers I Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3052587 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brother-Captain Sharp Posted May 3, 2012 Share Posted May 3, 2012 I'm in. :) It's time to finally get all these thoughts about the Angels of Retribution actually set and written down. Question, though: is there any sort of preference on size of either entry? I don't want to submit something much longer than what the judges were prepared to read over, if that makes sense. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3052872 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arioch Posted May 3, 2012 Share Posted May 3, 2012 Well, better get started, that chapter is not going to write itself. I hope my english will suffice :) This is going to be great :) If you're worried about your english i'll gladly proof read and lend a hand where possible. Same offer goes out to anybody really, just PM me first so we can arrange something and make sure i don't get bombarded with too many :) Al Thanks for the offer Alys, your help would be much appreciated :) I think I am on the right track at the moment... Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3052874 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand Master Belial Posted May 3, 2012 Author Share Posted May 3, 2012 I'm in. :) It's time to finally get all these thoughts about the Angels of Retribution actually set and written down. Question, though: is there any sort of preference on size of either entry? I don't want to submit something much longer than what the judges were prepared to read over, if that makes sense. You can look over the entrants on the Fortress site for an idea. But as a judge, I'd say we have been warned and go BIG. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3052879 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piousservant Posted May 3, 2012 Share Posted May 3, 2012 Just to clarify, writing a story is seperate from the creating a chapter bit? As in, I can write and submit a story about the Ravenwing or an existing chapter, or have I got that wrong? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3052894 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand Master Belial Posted May 4, 2012 Author Share Posted May 4, 2012 Just to clarify, writing a story is seperate from the creating a chapter bit? As in, I can write and submit a story about the Ravenwing or an existing chapter, or have I got that wrong? Correct, you can write a story AND/OR write up a preferably new chapter of the Unforgiven. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3053530 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Menkeroth Posted May 4, 2012 Share Posted May 4, 2012 Hmm. Good i've not missed that. May i participate? Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3053931 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Candleshoes Posted May 4, 2012 Share Posted May 4, 2012 Here is the start of a story for the competition (in spirit). Since my hobby time can only lend to one project, I decided to participate in a "unofficial" way, by fleshing out the Angels of Redemption, making a full IA article, background and supporting story/fluff. Even though next to nothing is known or developed about the majority of the current successors, I doubt Grand Master Belial would let this count towards the competition, and if that's the case, I'll keep going for the fun of bringing a bit of love to one of the second foundings. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3054041 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akatriel Posted May 4, 2012 Share Posted May 4, 2012 Greetings, brothers. This is my first post, although I´ve been reading this forum for quite some time now. I´m a long time fan of the First Legion, and I´m looking forward to see what the community comes up with for the Unforgiven. I would like to contribute too, with an IA of my DIY Chapter, the Angels Penitent (named by GW, but never developed). Only a question: I get that I could either open a new thread in this very subforum with the Chapter´s fluff, or send it to the moderators, am I right? Or is there some kind of mother-thread were we all post them (as there is one for the SoBs) and I´ve missed it? Also, English is not my first language, so, sorry for any mistakes. Feel free to correct me. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3054084 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Captain Semper Posted May 5, 2012 Share Posted May 5, 2012 (edited) Due to a dark coincidence my story is withdrawn until further notice... Edited May 5, 2012 by Captain Semper Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3054184 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grotsmasha Posted May 5, 2012 Share Posted May 5, 2012 I'm in, I've started my write up for The Heralds of Devastation, but only having the on-screen keyboard for my pc is making the process quite tedious..... Cheers, Jono Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3054223 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Isiah Posted May 5, 2012 Share Posted May 5, 2012 (edited) Also, English is not my first language, so, sorry for any mistakes. Feel free to correct me. Welcome Akatriel. Have no worries with the language issue ;). English is my first language yet remains littered with mistakes :P Edited May 5, 2012 by Isiah Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3054255 Share on other sites More sharing options...
dark jobo Posted May 5, 2012 Share Posted May 5, 2012 Hi guys, here is a short story, does it qualify ? http://www.bolterandchainsword.com/index.p...;hl=above+Sigma Cheers darkjobo Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3054429 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grand Master Belial Posted May 6, 2012 Author Share Posted May 6, 2012 Hmm. Good i've not missed that. May i participate? Of course you can! @ dark jobo, I will allow yours since it was written recently. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3054672 Share on other sites More sharing options...
whiteraven17708 Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 Ill be watching this, Maybe it will get me to finally get my DIY going, got a few ideas but tying them all together is eluding me im not a writer either, so I will not be entering but I will be cheering from the sidelines :) Good luck to all... gotta go think I just seen cypher...... Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3054681 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akatriel Posted May 6, 2012 Share Posted May 6, 2012 (edited) Here we go: the Angels Penitent Chapter of the First Legion. I Edited May 6, 2012 by Akatriel Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3054895 Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Shadow Guard Posted May 8, 2012 Share Posted May 8, 2012 I am quite stunned at the number of people who have expressed a wish to aprticipate in the "Brotherhood of Angels"competition and the standards they have displayed so far. With three weeks to go, I ask our unforgiven brethren to load up their quills/pencils/pens/typing fingers aas they may be, with creative writing and saddle up for the journey. The Brotherhood of Angels was our first secret, the Ë Tenebrae Lux"the second and there will be more to come circles within circles, secrets within secrets.... :o DO watch this space...and that...and the next..... ^_^ SG Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3056229 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Menkeroth Posted May 8, 2012 Share Posted May 8, 2012 (edited) Hmm. Good i've not missed that. May i participate? Of course you can! Thank you! Than i'll write of my Angels of Wrath, i suppose, next week. Study, course work, you know :drool: Edited May 8, 2012 by Menkeroth Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/251664-brotherhood-of-angels-competition/page/2/#findComment-3056663 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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