Clavicus Vile Posted October 31, 2012 Share Posted October 31, 2012 this is my diy chapter im making not got much atm but here goes:- Chapter Name :- Swords Of The Aquilla Origins:- Ultramarines Founding:- 11th or later Home Planet :- Fereldon Prime Fereldon Prime was a primitive world that wias invaded by orcs, an imperial guard army was sent in called Twin Peaks Guard and askd for help as they couldnt contain the invasion thats when the sword of the aquilla stepped in and contained the situation. Fereldon prime has two moons - Secondus and T7zx-4 - The swords now uses T7zx-4 as their main HQ and watch over the planets of Fereldon Prime which include a Death world, Koriban and a planer classified only as Q943-73. Since the swords have had watch over Fereldon Prime it has now become an industrial world with many agri spots with 3 main poppulation hives. Chapter Master :- Phelix Kanto (pedro kantor model) Wargear:- Artificer Armour, Storm Bolter, Power Fist, Frag & Krak Grenades, Iron halo Chaplain :- Rah Kofu Wargear:- Power Armour, Plasma Pistol, Frag & Krak Grenades, Rosarius, Crozius Arcanum Librarian :- Ismael Ramesses Wargear:- Power Armour, Plasma Pistol, Frag & Krak Grenades, Force Weapon, Psychic Hood, Epistolary Captain of the 2nd company :- Pheonix Thor Wargear:- Artificer Armour, Storm Bolter, Lightning Claw, Frag & Krak Grenades, Iron Halo This is all i have atm any c&c will be most welcome, its still a work in progress so keep that in mind thanks -Clavicus Vile- Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/264698-swords-of-the-aquilla/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
TDF Posted October 31, 2012 Share Posted October 31, 2012 Hi Clavicus (I'm a TES fan myself :lol:) Just a few questions that came to mind: Why do some of the worlds just have designations rather proper names? Seems a bit odd to have some planets with names and others with designations in the same system. Secondly, how did Fereldon Prime's evolution from primitive to industrial world affect the quality of recruits? A feral world would produce fierce warriors - perfect for Space Marine Chapters. An industrial could work though, with the focus being more on producing plenty of equipment and recruits coming from the Death World in the system instead. As you said, there isn't much to go on so far. How does the Chapter fight? What culture does it have? Any particular enemies it despises above all others? I look forward to finding out more. And I like the name 'Swords of the Aquila'. Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/264698-swords-of-the-aquilla/#findComment-3225245 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Clavicus Vile Posted October 31, 2012 Author Share Posted October 31, 2012 Hey TDF4638 thanks for the reply, yer like i say not much to go on atm but working on it. :P as for you questions, the designation rather than a name is just in place of a name for now, the first letter relates to the planets name just need to think of one. as for recruitment ive been working on this :- Fereldon Prime holds gladitorial battles with shock mauls and non lethal rounds to join the tactical squads of the chapter, all bouts are watched over by the chaplains, who turn up in full gear, to make sure all rites are enacted on gear and people alike. They also recruite from the other planets in the system, The death world (insert name) is usually where the chapters assault marines come from due to the harsh enviroments the tend to be more aggresive. Captains watch all bouts that happen and pick and choose their own initiates to join their squads, ill update main thread when i can as its hard to do on my phone :P again C&C welcome - Clavicus Vile - Link to comment https://bolterandchainsword.com/topic/264698-swords-of-the-aquilla/#findComment-3225317 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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